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Raven Canyne
I feel like something's not right. I've been feeling like this halfway throughout the way to the hospital.
I'm not sure what it is but this feeling just won't suffice.
I shouldn't worry since its just a gut feeling but I don't know, something definitely ain't right.
"You okay? You look constipated." Zeth said.
"I'm fine, just a bit nervous I guess. You know with the whole being able to see again." I said.
Yeah, that's right. I'm just nervous. I just need a distraction to get this feeling off my chest.
"Hey Zeth, tell me. What does Onyx look like to you?" I asked.
This may be a good distraction. I also want to know what Onyx looks like in another person's point of view.
"Seriously? You could have asked any question and you chose that?"
He linked with a sarcastic tone.
"Yup, I just want to know before I actually get a good look at him."
I think he sighed. I felt him take in a deep breath then breathed out.
"Fine. But know this, I am a guy and I don't particularly know how to describe other guys or explain their facial features or what ever. So I'll just tell you what I saw. Got it?" He linked.
"Uh-huh." I answered.
"Alright, based on what I saw he is a "bit" good looking, I look better." He linked and I couldn't help but roll my eyes inwardly.
A bit conceited there bro.
"He has black eyes like his name suggests. A straight knows a bit like mine. He's got jet black hair much like yours. Don't ask about lips because I'm not describing them, I'll just say their a bit pink."
Aww, and I wanted to know about the lips of the man I kiss.
"What else am I supposed to describe? Let's see, he's taller than me by about a few centimeters. He's got a good build but again, mine is better."
Ang again, I rolled my eyes.
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I am so very sorry. I have failed my readers. This may be the final update.
I know, its incomplete so forgive me.
I lost the draft for this story and my mind went blank with ideas to put. Well even if i continue to write it, it would be half assed so i beg for my readers forgiveness.
I disappointed some of you but do not fret. I'll be putting up a better story that will surely have a proper ending.
I'll consider this story one of my failed attempts.
Again, i'm really very sorry!
--naira
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