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Raven CanyneI feel like something's not right. I've been feeling like this halfway throughout the way to the hospital.
I'm not sure what it is but this feeling just won't suffice.
I shouldn't worry since its just a gut feeling but I don't know, something definitely ain't right.
"You okay? You look constipated." Zeth said.
"I'm fine, just a bit nervous I guess. You know with the whole being able to see again." I said.
Yeah, that's right. I'm just nervous. I just need a distraction to get this feeling off my chest.
"Hey Zeth, tell me. What does Onyx look like to you?" I asked.
This may be a good distraction. I also want to know what Onyx looks like in another person's point of view.
"Seriously? You could have asked any question and you chose that?"
He linked with a sarcastic tone.
"Yup, I just want to know before I actually get a good look at him."
I think he sighed. I felt him take in a deep breath then breathed out.
"Fine. But know this, I am a guy and I don't particularly know how to describe other guys or explain their facial features or what ever. So I'll just tell you what I saw. Got it?" He linked.
"Uh-huh." I answered.
"Alright, based on what I saw he is a "bit" good looking, I look better." He linked and I couldn't help but roll my eyes inwardly.
A bit conceited there bro.
"He has black eyes like his name suggests. A straight knows a bit like mine. He's got jet black hair much like yours. Don't ask about lips because I'm not describing them, I'll just say their a bit pink."
Aww, and I wanted to know about the lips of the man I kiss.
"What else am I supposed to describe? Let's see, he's taller than me by about a few centimeters. He's got a good build but again, mine is better."
Ang again, I rolled my eyes.
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I am so very sorry. I have failed my readers. This may be the final update.
I know, its incomplete so forgive me.
I lost the draft for this story and my mind went blank with ideas to put. Well even if i continue to write it, it would be half assed so i beg for my readers forgiveness.
I disappointed some of you but do not fret. I'll be putting up a better story that will surely have a proper ending.
I'll consider this story one of my failed attempts.
Again, i'm really very sorry!
--naira
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