Test Story *I NEED FEEDBACK*

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~Chapter One~

-pt. 1-

     I looked at the clock. 10 PM. Why isn't he answering? 10:01, 10:02, 10:0- I finally hear a ping on my computer. It was a message from Louis.

I'm sorry Hazz, football practice ran late tonight. Talk tomorrow?
~Lou

I quickly reply.

Yeah, of course. Get your rest. Until tomorrow.
~H.

I close my laptop. I just want to see him. If only he understood...

I close my eyes to fall asleep.

-pt. 2-

     I wake up to a ping.

Hey Hazz, I kept my promise. No football practice this weekend. Want to meet up Saturday?
~Lou

What a way to wake up, I thought. I replied, trying to stop grinning. Of course, it was impossible.

That would be great. Where? When?
~H.

Seconds later, I heard another ping.

Charlie's @ 3?
~Lou

Of course. Augh. I'm late for school. See you later. Love you.
~H.

Definitely. See you.
~Lou

I closed my laptop. He doesn't feel the same way, and I know that. Why would I even type those three words? But still, I finally get to meet him. How sweet is that? I hurry to get dressed. I run downstairs and grab my breakfast, and off to school I go.

AUTHOR'S NOTE

I KNOW THAT THIS ISN'T VERY GOOD, AND IT'S SUPER SHORT, BUT I'M TRYING NEW WRITING STYLES.  IF THERE'S ANY FEEDBACK, DON'T HESITATE TO TELL ME. I MAY OR MAY NOT CONTINUE THIS STORY. THANKS!
~K.

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