I wrote a whole chapter and it deleted it and it was good. I quit I just quit I HAT THIS STUPID WEBSITE.It was SUPPEERR long too. I feel like shiat. *facepalms while sighing heavily* I will try to remember this chapter but ok here we go for a 3rd time.
Chappie 5
(Lou's POV)
That was amazing. Sure I've kissed girls before but that was the best kiss ever. They had the same hotel as us, so I was able to walk her back to her room.
"G'night." I said as we arrived at her door.
"Night, Louis." She said with a slight smile on her face. I started to walk away, but turned on my heels and kissed her again, very sweetly.
( Abby's POV :P )
He turned on his heels, and gave me a very sweet goodnight kiss. As he started to turn away, grabbed his hand and asked very shyly,
"Can you stay tonight?"
"Sure." He said without hesitating. We walked back to his flat, and he grabbed a couple of things. We entered my flat, ad I started for the couch, but Louis beat me there, jumping on it and sprawling about. I was abou to protest but he said,
"It's okay, no biggie."with a smile playing at his lips.
"Okay, whatever you say."
"Where's the bathroom?"
Through there", I said while pointing down the hall.
"Thanks." He replied while grabbing his toothbrush, as I walked down the hallway to my bedroom.
( Abby's sleeping)
I was running for my life for the third time in 4 days. I tripped over my own feet, cursing quietly, while he grabbed me by my hair, pushing my against the brick wall.
"Not ever again, you have to be punished now." He said while smirking evilly.
"Please, don't do this."I quietly begged. He raised a switchblade I didn't know he had, to my throat.
"To late." He whispered.
(A/N Abby is awake now.)
I woke up screaming. I guess Louis heard, because he came running in my room in only boxers.
"What's wrong, love?" He asked concern showing clearly in his cracking voice as I cried into his now wet shoulder. I told him every detail of it and how long it has been going on.
"Love, I'm so sorry."
"Can you stay in here with me so I can try to fall asleep?"
"Sure." He got under the duvet with me an wrapped an arm protectively around my waist while I snuggled into his bare chest. I looked up at him.
"Thank you, for everything." I said while he looked down at me.
"No problem, Love." I snuggled deeper into his chest. I have finally decided that I was falling hard for Louis William Tomlinson.
(Lou's POV :) )
As she snuggled closer into my chest, I held onto her waist. My grip tightened around her as her breathing fell into a rhythm. I am falling and falling hard for Abigail Lynn Fletcher.
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