chapter 1

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ok well welcome i love this game and some words might be confusing so ill explain what they mean if you have any questions about what is going on or a word i didnt explain to well then ask me ! other than that lets start ! oh yeah about the picture ill add a picture every time we meet a new character so youll know what they look like on the far right is garret hawke(tom syndicate) then next to him is his sister bethany hawke next to her is there mother leandra hawke and then lastly next to her is her youngest son carver hawke


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Tom's pov -

"RUN THERE RUNNING FASTER"i yelled to my family my daggers clanking together i look behind me my sister casting a haste spell on her self while my brothers broad sword swinging around then finally my mother kinda behind then there was the darkspawn [the darkspawn, are a race of humanoid creatures that mostly dwell in the underground of Thedas(thedas is the world they live in) . they where expose to the taint which then leads them in an attack against the surface world called a blight(a big war against the humans and the darkspawn) . The darkspawn are perhaps the greatest single threat to all of Thedas; they are bloodthirsty, exceptionally numerous and willing to indiscriminately kill or corrupt all in their path.] they were right behind us i couldent do any thing i was scared we had to get out of there we were running from the battle of ostagar [The Battle of Ostagar was a major engagement during the fifth blight between the kingdom of Fereldon and the darkspawn Horde, and arguably the catalyst for the Fereldon civil war] in our old town of Lothering it was attacked by the dark spawn then we ran into a mountain path

"BETHANY DO IT !"i yelled and she casted a fire wall spell blocking them off for now but thank god im weak i looked at my pouch ... damn it i dont have any healing potions i looked at my daggers ... they remind me off my father

"i think thats all of them"carver stated "for the moment" bethany finished

"maker save us we've lost it all everything me and your father built "my mother sighed

"i know how much lothering meant to you but we have to move" i said trying to comfort her

"yes...your right" she said "we should of ran sooner why did we wait so long !" my sister chirped in angered

"why are you looking at me i have been running since ostagar" he said back

"LISTEN YOU TWO the dark spawn can be on us any minute .." i started " Please you two listen to your brother"my mother finished i looked back at the fire and the two dark spawn left that wall is not going to last any longer we better go

"fine go .. lead on"my brother said and i walked why do i all ways have to lead the group ? i walked and i found a dead body it looked dead for awhile i looked him over and searched him he had some gold but i dont think that will be of any use right now and he had a bow hmm seems in good shape but i have my daggers if we get out of this i could sell it for maybe 2 silvers ill keep it i grabbed it and attached it to my belt and we started walking i looked over and saw some more dead bodies i went to check them... junk ... junk...and ! more junk well its good to check they dont need these thing any more

i walked and i saw some more darkspawn ugh there is no way to get around them were going to have to fight them so i ran behind one of them and stabbed the one in the head it quickly turned around and it tried to stab me whit its sword i jumped back and my brother ran up and sliced it i looked over and saw bethany shooting a fire ball at one of then i think carver has this one so i ran and threw my dagger at the darkspawn it flew and it hit the thing in the leg it fell over and i ran grabbed the dagger and stabbed it again it was dead and i saw my brother running over to use he had blood all over him and so did i i nodded and we walked up the hill

"*breaths* wait where are we going ?" bethany said "away from the dark spawn where else " he said "and then where we cant just wander around"she finished why do they always fight i have to break this up

"where ever we go whats important is that we dont separate "i said and my mom looks like she was thinking

"we can go to KirkWall !"my mom said and that suprised me

"KirkWall ?... are you sure thats wise ?" i asked "theres alot of templars in KirkWall mother !"my sister said scared [templars and mages do not get along well they hate each other and mages are consired dangerous so they are locked up if they are found and they go to special places called circles where they learn to control there magic and some think its a great place while some thinks its the worst templars are people who work in the city guard and they are swords men or rouges]

"i know that but we still have family there and an estate"she said sadly [an estate is a place or items that are pasted down from parents and kids ]

"*sighs* then we need to get to gren and take ship"she started"IF we survive that long ... ill just be happy if we get out of here "our brother said then i heard running and fighting and then dark spawn ran up to us

"THERES MORE OF THEM"i yelled

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so how do you like the first part i hope i did good explaining the weird words if you have any questions about the game or this ask me but for now bye !



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