My first impression I got from this book was that it was going to be amazing, and "live". I thought the book was going to be very "thuggish" and "gangsterish" but it wasn't. It did have some "thug" scenes in it, but for the most part it was mainly like one of those books about some white people taking walks on the beach or something.
When the author, Ebony Goddess, proceeded to do the "thug" scenes they were very cliche and predictable at the most. It seemed as if she had been watching way too many "gangster movies" or read too many books, and tried to include those "whack ass" scenes in expecting it to be great. When it was a fail. (Honey stop watching so many movies, please.)
The description didn't too much go with the book in my opinion either. I felt like the concept of the book was good, but she didn't know where to take it nor did she know how to stay on track with the concept. The book also moved very quickly. I think by the third chapter, the main character, Diamond had moved in with the thug "Quentin". I don't know if y'all feel the same way as me, but that is moving too fast for a book.
Also, her punctuation annoyed me. Every time one of the characters would say something it'd look like this "I love you Quentin," <--- Honey I don't know if you know this, but you don't end a sentence with a comma you end it with a period, question mark, exclamation point, etc...! But you do not end it with a comma.
Overall I would give this book a rough C-!
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