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I walked out to where the patio was, I looked back and forth to see who wanted me, I walked out to look over the stars, they were so beautiful, I heard a voice behind me and I heard the Patio doors close behind me.
"There almost as Beautiful as you." I heard Zack say, I turned around to see the most nicest looking guy at this prom, He was so handsom, he had a black suit with a white vest under.
"You look handsom," I said smiling, but keeping my distance from him just in case someone see's us,
"Well, You are the best looking girl here," He said walking towards me, did he know we were where everyone can see us, the patio is where all the kids come to cool off after dancing,
"Thanks," I said turning around and leaning on the fence,
"Baby, you know no one knows where were at." He said putting his hands around my waist,
I jumped, "Yeah but this is the patio, everyone comes out to cool off," I said turning around in his grip,
"Hun, the doors are locked and are being watched by Kayla and Katie, Were aloud to be out here for an hour," He said with a big smile on his face,
"I love you." I said kissing him, This was the sweetest thing anyone has every done for me,
"I love you too babe," He said pulling away. He walked over to a little window, that was way to small for anyone to look out, and when he opened the window I heard a slow song, and he walked back over to me and took me by my hand, "May I have this dance my far lady?" He asked me with a huge smile.
"Well..."I acted like i was thinking, he made a sad face,"Yes you may" I said with a smile,
He put his hands on my waist and I put mine around his neck, We slow dance thoughtout the whole song not talking just me with my head on his shoulder and him humming to the song. As the song was going off he pulled away and took my hand and twirled me around, in a cricle, I laughed and huged him when I faced him, this was so much fun, I never thought that I would be out having fun in public with him, I heard a girls laugh which made me jump and I looked at the window and saw Kaite and Kayla laughing at us, I smiled at them.
"Baby, Your a good dancer" He said with a smile making me look at him.
"I know,, And your not so bad yourself." I said getting up on my tip toes and kissing his neck.
That hour went by so fast, I was so mad when Katie said it was time to go dance with then kids my age, But he said he'd see me at my appartment because he had something for me.
I laughed and walked away with katie, we went out on the dance floor and started to dance, I was having a blast, We danced for almost the whole dance, we never sat down one time, until I felt a pain in my stomach and had to forse Katie to let me sit down. I knew since I had a baby inside me I had to calm down. Zack saw me and came walking over to me and pulled me to the side,
"You ok babe?" He wispered so I couldn't barly hear him.
"Yea, Just a sharp pain." I said looking a little worried.
"I think you over did it, I'll go tell Mrs Henry that I'm not feeling good and I'll take you home." He said walking off. "Meet me by my car."
I walked into the dance hall, and I looked around for Katie, I saw her kissing her boyfriend, I walked over and tapped her on her shoulder, "Hey I'm getting a ride home with 'you know who' I'll text you tomorrow." I said while I grabbed my stuff, She got up and hugged me goodbye and I walked out and walked outside and made my way over to Zack's Car.

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