Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: The Time of the Eclipse

Chapter 1 part 1: What is happening!?

Caryl's POV

" Ugh... I hate this test... ". To make it clear, I am answering a test which is burning my mind!

Luckily I was at the last question, " And... Done! Finally! " I stood up and gave the paper to my teacher, I said goodbye and exited the classroom. " I can finally meet the girls! " I thought.

Eiyah's POV
I was waiting for Caryl with the girls: Kristine and Monica. I tapped my foot impatiently, " Were is she? " I asked.

" Maybe she is still taking the test " Monica replied. " Yeah " Kristine said.
" Oh look! She's here! " Monica exclaimed.

Sure enough Caryl was running towards us..
" Sorry... to keep.... you waiting " she breathed.

" Nah, it's okay! " I said happily as we walked towards the locker room.

~~~~ At the locker room ~~~
As I was about to close my locker, I heard a shrill scream.

" AAAAHHHH!! Guys help!! " wait, that voice belongs to Kristine! I ran towards the voice, and soon enough I saw Kristine being dragged inside in some sort of void or portal, with Caryl and Monica trying to stop her from being sucked in.

I dropped my things and grabbed Monica's waist, I tried to stay on my feet, but the force of the void was too strong for us and we got pulled in.
" AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!! "

Kristine's POV
Shrill screams filled the void, but no one seems to hear. Suddenly I felt like someone was stabbing me in the lung, and it hurt like hell. And then I began choking.

Then I felt my arms and legs feel like their being squished.
Crack!
Argh! My bones were breaking!

Then I felt my body being smaller, my hair hardened and something was growing on my head. It all hurts like heck! I dared to look at my arm, but before that I felt my second finger combine with my middle finger, and my ring finger combine with my pinky.

After the pain lessened, I looked at my arm, my eyes widened when I saw my own arm, it was pure white and only had three fingers on it. " I guess that's why I felt my two fingers combine... " I thought.

Then my face started to hurt, I felt my nose and ears getting smaller. I also felt my lips getting thinner and my mouth getting a bit smaller to suit my face, oh and my eyes feel like their being larger.

The rest of the transformation was more painful than before, so I can't really describe it.

I gasped for air and began mumbling to test if I can still talk. Luckily I can, then my mind starts to hurt, many images and information were spilled into my mind. And it hurt the most.

So I began screaming my life out.
" AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! " I yelled.

Then I felt heat touching my skin. I opened my eyes and saw light, it slowly became larger until-
PLOP!
I landed on something soft. I was too tired to know, so I fainted on the spot.

~~~~~~
500 words! WHOOP WHOOP!!~ It was sooooo hard to make this sooo.... ENJOY!