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Marking

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Four months ago)

I sink low to the ground, making my snow white fur disappear behind the tall brown grass. I'm downwind so I know the big buck won't smell me. He paws the ground and lets out a territorial grunt. The other deer around the area move slowly away from him. They are all his doe's and he fawn's. He's fought long and hard for this high position and he doesn't want to give it up. All he has now is intimidation. Not that long ago I had his back leg in my mouth. I wounded him but not anything to kill him right away. I've fallowed him since that day watching him fall back behind the hared. His leg hasn't healed right and it has become infected. A young buck comes into the clearing. He's almost the size of the big buck but he's not. The buck struts over to him, his head low to the ground. The young buck is intimidated and hops back into the forest. The big buck lifts his head in victory. I creep in farther, passing a young fawn hiding in the grass. I know she sees me but she's petrified in fear. I could killer her but she isn't who I'm after. I step over twigs and rocks getting closer and closer to the buck.

Suddenly the fawn behind me darts out to her mother giving me away. The deer all run. The big buck is in the middle of the heard. I'm pelted with small rocks and dirt but I give chase. I pass a few does making them run into the forest. The heard is thinning out and leaving the buck exposed. They smell the infection and they know he is growing weak. The buck is pushing himself trying to ignore the pain but I'm right on top of him. He kicks back knocking me in the face. Fuck that hurt. I don't give up. He turns from the meadow and runs into the thicket. With blood trailing down my face into my eye I run in after him. My vision is blurred in one eye but luckily I know the area that he ran into. I make a sharp left circling the buck coming to his side. I nip at his shoulders tearing flesh with my fags as he runs. As the blood hits my tongue I get a rush energy. I haven't tasted fresh blood for a while and his blood was so intoxicating last time I knew I couldn't let him get away. I chase him into a dead end and he knows he'll have to die trying to escape me. His eyes are wild and I can see the whites of them. He's foaming at the mouth and shaking his head side to side. I'm careful of his antlers for they are sharp and long. He charges me and I move in. I find myself under him right by his wind pipe. I launch myself into his neck basking in the blood that pours out on top of me. He tries he's best to kick me off of him but he's slowly fading and with each beat his heart makes blood gushes into my mouth. He sinks to his knees making desperate cries. The big buck has been brought down by me. I finally did it. I've killed something that was bigger than me. As he's last breath fades from his legs I let go and howl my victory. I shift to my human form, my naked body covered in blood. From the top of my head running down my knees is the crimson color of victory.

I wake up to stars and the moon. Ricky's body is gone and so is Braxton. I jump up and look franticly around. I rush over to his tent and peeking in. no luck. I take deep breathes trying to pick up his sent. "Braxton where are you" I think. I remember wrapping my body around him and tasting his blood and tears as I licked his face. I jump up into the tree above Braxton's tent and grab my stuff. Jumping down I shift into human form and change into a pair of shorts and a tank top. My body is covered in bruises and scratches. My ribs have it bad. There's a deep slash that will probably need stitches to help it heal. I wince in pain as I pull the tank top over it. "Fucking hell, why did I even try to fight four wolves at once?!" I shake my head slightly and laugh. "There's no point in thinking about it now. I mean I killed one so I'm sure I'm screwed " I hear a twig snap and a small voice say "No....you're not screwed Jade" I spin around and stare right into Braxton's big eyes. " Braxton!" I exclaimed wrapping him in a hug. His tinny body feels even tinnier than before I pull back and take a closer look at him. His eye is a little bruised but it should be healed by the morning. He's nose is broken and that won't heal. I look at his neck and try not to cry. Even though Silver isn't an alpha he's still a higher leave wolf and the wounds might leave a nasty scar. I place my fingers softly on his neck. Braxton pulls back a little but relaxes under my touch. "I'm sorry you had to fight for me Jade. I shouldn't have even made a sound when they were beating me." Braxton's big golden eyes fill with tears. I pull Braxton into me and let him cry. "I'm so sorry Jade. I'm pathetic and useless and the one person that has ever showed me kindness is hurting because of Me." he might be small but he's putting all his weight on me in my weaken state he's pretty heavy. I laugh a little as we drop to our knees "Braxton" I say softly pulling him into my lap. "I didn't have to fight for you...I chose to because this pack is a major shit hole and doesn't know a good wolf when they see on." Braxton is still crying as he holds onto me. He pushes his little face into my neck "no matter how far I traveled I couldn't escape this pack and what it had done to me." I confess to Braxton who I really am and why I've come. He listens to my every word. His big golden eyes fill with more tears as I tell him about my Rejection and how I tried to keep my composer the day when I seen Sage and Lilly. I laugh as his tears become giant waterfalls. Never in my life had someone cried for me yet here I am hold onto someone as they cry because of my life. Even when it's my fault his in this position. I pull him closer to me when his cries become uncontrollable. His little body is still shaking as he drifts off to sleep in my arms.