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The Bowen family just moved to a new house. Nobody lived in that neighborhood, just a bunch of empty houses. The family members are: Maddy, (youngest, 6) Griffin, (2nd oldest 8) Kendra (oldest 14) and the parents Eric (dad ) and Amy (mom). Griffin had a bad feeling about this house. Griffen slept in the attic, he didn't like it at all. When it was ime for everyone to go to sleep, Griffin herd a music box noise in the attic. He found it coming from a little door in the wall. When he opened it, there was a ball hanging from a string. He pulled it and bunches of clowns fell but that ball hanging from the string, was one clown's nose. The nose slowly got in place and the clown laughed. Griffin told his dad he heard a sound and his dad checked out the door. A squirrel jumped out and they were screaming. Maddy and Kendra came into the hall to see what was going on. Soon mom, Kendra, and Maddy were waiting outside of the attic door. They came out just fine. Griffin ended up sleeping in his parent's bed. In the middle of the night the electricity was going from light,to light, from toy, to toy. Griffin woke up and went downstairs to check it out. He saw Maddy in front of the T.V. talking to someone. But she was talking to the T.V. Maddy then put her hand on the T.V. knowing that they were coming. Griffin tried to stop her, but she just responded "They're coming." Bunches of handprints appeared on the T.V. Griffen asked who but before she answered her parents came down. Then Maddy said "They're here." The next morning, they had breakfast and then their dad left. He went and robbed a bank to buy everyone presents. Kendra got a new phone, Griffin got a new toy with a camera. Griffin tried to tell his dad what happened earlier he didn't listen. What he tried to explain was that his mom asked to bring his comic books upstairs and when he did he saw a baseball roll from Maddy's room. He didn't see Maddy so he put it back inside her room, as he was walking out, he saw the ball move again. But this time it went to Maddy's closet door. He ran away but his comic books were piled and blocked the hall then they blew and disappeared. Later that day his parent's went to a party. People from the party said that one of their brothers, lived in that neighborhood. They never visited because before there was a graveyard exactly where that neighborhood was. The graveyard got moved. Eric and Amy said that the house instructor never said anything about that. While Kendra was babysitting a storm came so Maddy and Griffin could not sleep. Kendra was downstairs when her phone broke. She heard weird things and voices coming in spots of the house with her phone. She came to the basement and something broke through the ground grabbing her. As that happened upstairs in the attic the clown attacked Griffen. Finally he got out and saw Maddy cuddling her toys on the floor, she was scared. Griffin left her when he shouldn't of. Her closet turned into a portal type thing and something took her. And for Griffin, he got taken by a tree branch. When the parents got home they saw Griffin hanging by a branch on the tree outside. They got him down and Kendra said they couldn't find Maddy. They checked everywhere. No luck. They went to this place about paranormal things. They went to the house with them and they tried a calling for Maddy. They barley heard her voice, but they still did. The mother put her hand against the T.V. and Maddy's hand appeared. They put holes through the walls and connected ropes. That was the way they got in and out of the place where Maddy was. Griffin went in even though his mom said no. Griffin said,"i have to go it's my fault. I left her alone." He went and they sent his toy with the camera in it so they could see inside that place. He found Maddy and they went back. They were in almost like a coma. They took both of them to the bath because they were slimey and they needed to wake up. Griffin first woke up then Maddy. When they were about to leave it wasn't over. The car flipped over and they couldn't get out. The car was dragged into the house. Maddy was almost taken by the "lost people" again. They got her back. And they found a new house. THE END

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⏰ Last updated: Nov 16, 2015 ⏰

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