Diffrent ending for MMRTPCITW

Yo! How are you all doing?! Good I hope.

Ok. So. I know the ending for My Mate Rejected Me The Most Powerful Creature In The World was not a happy ending. But I wanna show you guys that not everything is a happy ending.

Anyways Since there has been a lot of hate for that part, I’m making another ending. Those of you who don’t know what this story is about, feel free to read the actual version on my profile. Anyways…I’m not mad at any of you.

To Tell you the truth..MMRMTMPCITW was supposed to have a happy ending. But when I told my friend to write it for me by phone, she miss understood And wrote about Chase’s death. And nothing more.

Now Here is the way the book was supposed to end. And no. This will not affect the sequal that a fellow wattpader is writing. (Check the last chapter in the original version.)

 

So. Here it is

How I ORIGINALLY wanted it to end.

 

 

Kat’s pov.

Chace…

He’s dead.

I couldn’t save him

He died in my arms.

Everything is a jumbled mess now.

The kids are taking it very hard. Obviously, but it’s still sad.

The pack misses their leader. And I am seriously in pain.

Zayn keeps trying to make the moves on me. But I won’t give him the time of day

It’s all so hard.

 

 

IN BATTLE

 

At the battle though, when Wrath reveals himself and starts attacking, we win, obviously And that night, we rejoice on our victory

But that night, when I went to bed with Zane, something happened.

A light came in from the window, and I instantly sat up.

A white figure came in and sat in front of me.

Chace.

I gasped in realization.

He smiled.

“Hello love.” He said.

I smiled wobbily as tears slipped.

“Hi. Chace” I said as I blinked.

“The Moon Goddess has seen you do your wok and laboring moments. So she decided to give you a reward for your knobble ways. And let me live.” Chace said with a smile.

“But my body is already decaying, so I have to have a host. And I chose Zayn.”

“What? How?” I asked.

“Because. I love you. And He’s a changed man. I can easily connect my spirit with his and his wolf’s. He won’t mind. And I can take control when I want. We’ll be two spirits in one body. And its actually not a bad thing. We will e rich in knowledge and stronger. A better Alpha King for the world. And so as I chose him, it will be as I said.” He said.

“But can’t they make another body for you?” I asked.

“No love. It has to be born. And since I don’t want to be a burden to a new born pup, I will be with Zayne until a new body comes up. A strong one. Then you will have two kings And two mates. I am willing to share. And so is Zayn.” He said with a smiled.

I smiled too.

He leaned in and kissed my lips softly. I smiled and kissed him back.

When I pulled back, he was walking towards Zayn’s sleeping body

He touched Zayn’s forehead and disappeared

A gasp left Zayn’s lips.

“What the hell? Why is someone else inside me?” Zayn asked shocked.

Then sat still for a while, looking out into space.

“Chace?” he whispered

Then continued to look out into space.

All I could do was look at them both while Chace explained to Zayn how this crap worked.

Once I assume he was done, Zayn rolled to his side and faced me.

He cupped my cheek with a hand and sparks erupted in me 10 times stronger than before.

Then kissed me.

I swear to god a light wrapped around us.

And if it wasn’t that, it was warmth and fireworks.

And that night, I made love to my mates.

Not just one But two. And they’re in the same body, taking turns in taking me, But they both loved it.

And I loved them even more.

 

THE END.

OR HOW I WOULD OF LIKE IT TO END.

 

Not a HAPPY happy ending, but better then the other version.

Thanks for your patience and for at least reading my book. Has a lot of problems I know, but hopefully I solved the major problem..the ending.