hey guys ! it's kennedi and this time i'm gonna be reviewing female robbery by @hoodisfire , and let me say i really wish there were more than just 3 chapters for me to read because damn i didn't wanna stop.
title : kinda mysterious and it fits really well with the description and story line. you don't really get it till you reach the third-ish chapter but when it clicks you're like "ooohhhh." and i love it
cover : it goes perfectly with everything since it's a police car and they steal for a living
plot : amazing wtf there's stuff all over the place that you want to figure out. pieces need to be put together and the way you laid it out means you'll just have to wait and see for answers. the only problem is that i don't know if i can wait
description : kinda cute, kinda mysterious. i like how you used the word "suddenly" because that means everything happened so quick because of michael and after reading what you wrote that one word means a lot
character development : there are only three chapters so there wasn't too much character development. but the way you dove right in and gave us a nice idea of who to love and who to hate was good. plus, you didn't wait till like chapter 15 to introduce one of the most important characters like some authors do and that makes it better
ending notes : the idea for this story was really unique and i can't wait to keep reading it. (*cough* update soon, meagan *cough*) i highly recommend this story to all of you and can't wait to keep reading it :D
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