thrill ride by pajamamikey

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hi hello and MERRY CHRISTMAS TO THOSE WHO CELEBRATE IT YEE !! it's kennedi back for another fanfic review yay yay yay !

title : i like it tbh, it goes v well with the description and it makes you wanna click into it and figure out what the story is gonna be about 

cover : goals wtf

plot : gonna be honest here, the way they met was a bit overused, but it's not bad.  there are a lot of things you can add that'll make the story v different, and i can't tell if you have or not because i only read a couple of chapters. but if you keep going the shit is gonna be 10/10 

description : short and nice 

character development : not much since i didn't read that much, but it sure does look like the characters clung onto each other hella fast 

ending notes : we're sorry for the late review, but i wanted to say that i feel like it's gonna get better as you keep going. you feel ? keep writing and it's be good af i swear 


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