Harry Potter Fanfic of the Week

12/13: Ruins by haIfblood

RUINS BY haIfblood:

LOVE INTEREST: Harry Potter

SYNOPSIS: ❝There's a darkness on the edge of town...❞

There was a darkness coming. A war to end all wars, an evil that was rising with nothing that could stop it. The Order of the Phoenix was reassembling, and this time, they have a weapon far greater than anything they could've produced; a weapon that would defeat Lord Voldemort. A weapon no one knew about.

Her.

[ order of the phoenix - deathly hallows ][ harry potter ][ written by Heidi // 2015 ][ featured in the official wattpad @Fanfic account's Harry Potter Reading List ]

REVIEW BY tranquilette:
I really really really love this book! I haven't finished it totally yet, I have a few chapters left. The whole book is extremely good, and I love everything about it: the plot, how it leaves you on the edge of your seat; the character development, how Diana goes from a cold, closed of character to actually being friends with the other characters; and last but not least Harry and Diana!! They are just so cute, and these are the relationships I love: the slow developing ones. Now onto the spelling and grammar, I can't really see any problems. I really enjoyed reading this book.

REVIEW BY -bluemaximoff:
Well, so I haven't read the whole book just until the three first chapters but I think I have enough. The description on the book is simple but catches your eye, the playlist is on point, perfect. And about your character, Diana, I don't have anything bad to say about her. She's mature, knows how to defend herself and at the first encounter with Albus I already loved her. I can see she's the type of person who won't let anyone step over her, and even in a room full of adults who may judge her, she knows how to make them listen and respect her. I think you're doing a great job with this story and I'm looking forward to keep reading it. Also, I have to give you credit because you know how develop your OC, sometimes when someone wants to make a strong female character may end up making her bitchy and hateful without noticing, but Diana isn't like that, I like it. And well about the spelling, I don't really have anything to say about that either, to me is perfect (you can see I have spelling mistakes too. I'm not the right person to say anything) What I mean to say is, your story is great, you're doing a great job, and you achieve to make your readers hang on your words. And that's all a fanfic reader wants is it?

REVIEW BY jackskeIIington
I love  the book so far, I've only read the first four chapters, and I can't wait to read more. I honestly love Diana, she's so powerful and mature and a strong female character, but she's not rude or bitchy. Diana reminds me of Lydia, which makes me love her even more. I already ship Harry and Diana even though they only just met. I'm very curious to find out why Diana has visions, because she said she's not a seer. For grammar and spelling, it's perfect, like why can't I do that. The story is great and you as an author are a wonderful writer, so keep up the good work.

REVIEW FROM simonslewis:
Okay so I haven't read that far into this book but from what I can tell so far it is really good. I love Diana, how she's so badáss and how put together her character is. I also really like the friendship between Sirius and Diana (by the way what's their BROTP name?) and I can't wait to read more into this book. The way you wrote ot shows that you've actually planed this book out, which is good and I don't think many do that. I really like how Voldemort is her father and you describe really well her feelings towards him, which I can totally understand, because let's be honest what kind of father would Tom be? All in all, I enjoyed reading this book and I hope you'll update soon.

COMMENTS FROM READERS:

"Not even a full chapter in and I'm already loving this story, the dark vibes are hyping me up!" - rockinwithbae

"tbh this is beautiful." - -moony

"CLAPPING MY HANDS!" - roysharpers