ok so this part is mystery..no love.. well maybe alittle towards the end ..plz comment .. what i can work on and whats good ..thnxx!!!!!!!
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Victorias POV
"j.j' said hotch , hotch motioned her over . " j.j is goin to catch you up on the case" he said looking at me and then to j.j .. " ok" she said . Hotch walked away and he motioned Morgan to go out with him, they stepped outside of the doors. I focused my attention back on the team " ok so this man would abduct girls between the ages of 10-15 years old , so farhe has only gotten his hands on 3 , he would keep them hostage , but then he would let them go , and after a few minutes he would go hunting for them , and when he finds the girl .. he kills her " " so why let them go ? , why not just kill them right then and ther ?" i asked . Reid walked up to us " well he feels superioir to them , hes sure he"ll find them because they are weak" he said .." ok luvies, i found a connection between the girls " said a voice on the speaker " ok garcia were ready " said j.j " well for starters theyre all brunette , they have been in a foster home for girls since the age of 10 , and also they all live 10 minutes apart " hmmm" i said out loud by accident .
" any leads ?" came a deep voice behind me , i jumped, phew for a split second i thought it was god , but it was only Hotch with Morgan next to him . i looked at Morgan but he quickly looked away . " uhhh... yeah we have a few .. umm.. well theyve all been in foster homes at the age of ten , theyre all brunnetts and they live only a 10 minute distance from each other" i said , hoping i sounded smart. " ok garcia get me all the adresses of the girls " said Hotch towards the speaker . " ok sir ... you guys will magically recieve them on your phones ........now." . Hotch took out his ipad , he loked at it and then back at us " j.j and Ried go to Alyssa"s house, Morgan take Bennett with you you guys will go to Sarahs house , and Rossie come with me we'll go to Chloe"s house"
Once we got in the car i started to feel nervous, because i was alone with a man that was just way to sexy , i didnt want temptation in the car with us . " where are you from ?" he suddenly asked .." uh...im from california " i responded, i sounded so so self conscience " NO WAY !!!! im from there to !" he said all excited .. we laughed as he turned on the car , boy did he have a nice laugh , it came from deep inside ..it wasnt fake , like most boys" i could honestly say i was fallin in love
( 20 MINUTES LATER )
"Ok ready?' he asked , we had parked in front of a rundown looking house out in the middle of nowhere . " yup lets go " i said getting out and walking towards the house. Morgan knocked on the door so hard , i thought it was going to fall off , an old scared looking lady opened the door just a crack . " can i help you ?" she asked in a raspy voice ." ma'm were from the FBI , im agent derek morgan and this is agent Victoria Bennett " " hi " i said flashing her a smile , thats is the number 1 way to gain someones trust ..to smile ." she smiled a toothless smile " im lucy" she said " well Lucy were here to talk to you about your daughter Sarah" i said calmly. At the sound of her daughters name she flung the door open , " oh yes, yes come on in please" . we walked in and we stood there akwardly " sit , sit" she said motioning toward the couch , Morgan and i sat down together , while the lady sat in front of us in her rocking chair.
" the thing is , she is not my daughter" she started off " yes ma'm we are aware that she was placed in a foster home for girls in the age of 10" i said . she continued as if she hadnt heard me " her mom and dad passed away in a car accident when she was only 5 months old " " did she ever mention the names Alyssa or maybe Chloe ?" asked morgan " " oh heavens my memory has been bad ever since 1997 " she said " how old was Sarah ?"i asked looking at the pictures around the room of the deceased girl " she was 15...i rememeber when i was 15 and -" " ma"m i would love to hear your story ,but i have a question where there any boyfriends?" " jesus christ NO , i told her she wasnt allowed to date until the age of 18 , .....MY mother wouldnt let me date until i was 18 " oh gosh this is goin to take a while i thought, i could tell that Morgan was getting impatient.
she was STILL talking " uh excuse me but were you always aware of her whereabouts ?" i asked trying not to sound rude." no, uhm , she had started to sneak out ,so i put locks on all the windows but she just walked straight out the house" poor lady she was on the verge of tears" was there anything that she didi that you a had specifically told her not to ?" asked morgan" well a part from sneaking out , yes, .......she got a tattoo..
