Bad Night

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I get out of work and walk to my car, the Parking lot is empty. I get to my car and try to unlock it with the clicker but it is not working, then I go and put the key in to the lock of the car and the key breaks. I kick my car. I take out my cell phone to call some one for help and it turns out my cell phone is dead. This is just not my day. What else can go wrong. I hear a noise I look around the empty parking lot and see nothing.

I take out my knife that I keep in my back pocket and look around. This sucks I start to walk home. I get to the park and hear a twig snap behind me I look behind me and see nothing. When I turn around and see a guy in front of me, he looks about 6"1' and he has black hair that is in a pony and he has blue eyes, he also has muscles.I still have my knife out and I have it pointed at the guy. The guy has his eyes on the knife. "Put that down before you hurt yourself Jamie." he said. I almost drop the knife when he said my name.

I stare at him in shock. I Can't even talk. I finally find my words. "How do you know my name?" I said. He looks at me and smiles when he smiles I see two sharp fangs. All I can think about is to run so I turn around to run but do not get that far when I am grabbed from behind. I can see a needle in his hand. I try to fight to get away from him when I feel a prick on my neck and pass out.

I just came up with this i wanted to know what you think of it. let me know what you think and i might write more and I do not know a title for this yet.

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