I made improvements to the 1st chapter should I keep it or change it back??

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I think I love my bully
FanfictionTiana's father left her and her mother a while back.Her mom uses drugs and alcohol and brings home a new man every night.Not only does she get bullied by Jacob..But he just might be her first real love.
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I made improvements to the 1st chapter should I keep it or change it back??