This... Is my talent? (idea #1)

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the * are for the actions the characters are doing.

the way I write is weird but oh well. tell me if this is a story i should continue!!

                                                                                                       Square-PuP

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Hello! I'm Color Life. Me and my other 2 group members are stationed on another planet known as Eria. We are stationed here becuase if we get more planets for Princess Celestia, we can extend equestria! And more ponies can live in more places.

I don't exactly know becuase I'm still just a filly.

I have a twin whose name is Mist Splash!

She is an earth pony!

She already got her cutie mark. she is a life guard, and swims really good!!

I kind of miss her...

I'm a unicorn! But the only things I can do is levitate a few things...

I don't have a cutie mark, but I try and wrk on things my team calls "duties".

Your probably wondering why I'm stationed at a dangerous planet, yet being a filly.

Well we have a special way of defending ourselves.

You see, princess Twighlight Sparkle invented this new weapon, she calls it a lazor!

It's like a helmet, and when we look at something, there's sensors in the inside of the helmet that connect to our brain and nerves or something, and whenever we tell it to shoot at something, BOOM!!!

Pretty cool huh?

Yup.

Well I've told you who I am!

I hope I see you again!

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???: color! Make sure you eat your breakfast this time! I don't want you getting sick when we are being ambushed again! *puts pancakes on the table then leaves out a sliding door*

Color life: wait! Jean! Can you help me get the-! *runs out elevator* oh no. How am I going to get the syrup?! *walks towards pantry and stares at syrup on the top shelf* 

Uh-oh...

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That was Jean. She always calls me Color. She is an earth pony! She makes us yummy food.

She says that she was the second pony to be stationed here. Which I think is cool!

She already has her cutie mark. And isn't a filly anymore. She turned 18 last week!

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Color Life: I can only use my magic when I'm close to the object!!! Ummmmmm? Lets see. *looks around* AHHHA! *runs up to a chair and pulls it in pantry* Errrr!!! *climbs up and uses magic to make the syrup come down* Yes!!! *runs back to pancakes and pours syrup.* Nom! *eats*

???: *walks in through the sliding door* Hey life. I see your enjoying some of Jeans pancakes huh?

Color life: yeah! Their great!!! Want one? I think she made extras!

???: no thanks, I ate some earlier. And plus I gotta go meet Jean in the ships quarters. She wants me to fix the turbine. *Grabs a toolbox on the floor next to the table.* But I'll see you when we takeoff!! Bye!! *runs quickly out with toolbox in mouth*

Color: oh! But! Uhhh. Okay. Ill see you later Zip Slash.

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That was Zip Slash! He always calls me life. He is a pegussus! He has his cutie mark. He's been in this group since before me and Jean came here! He is our leader! But most of the time it looks like Jean is the boss.

Haha

He's 20.

Your probably wondering why I'm a filly and they aren't.

Well that'll come up later.

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*2 hours later*

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Zip: Well. It looks way better than it did when the Robot monkeys attacked! *smiles and admires his work.*

Jean: *walks around from the back of the turbine.* No kidding!! hope it stays that way! *walks over to Zip.*

Zip: *admires Jean instead.*

Jean: Should we take it out for a spin?

Zip: U-Uhh yeah! *snaps out of it*

Color: I WANNA COME TOO!!! *jumps in front of Zip waving her arms around*

Zip: *Jumps and squeels a little*

Jean: Of course!! C'mon lets go! *starts walking but stops and looks back at Zip* Scaredy cat!

Zip: What?! Hey!!! *chases*

Jean: * luaghs and starts running* Hurry Color!!

Color: Hahahaaaaa!! Scaredy cat! Scaredy cat!! *runs*

Zip: Get back here!

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Its been awhile since we had that much fun...

Where did it go?.....

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