Frozen Apart // Frozen/RotG // Jelsa

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4.13.16

FYI my author's notes at the end of the chapter are long and generally rated PG and occasionally 13+

There isn't anything important after the bold in those sections, so feel free to skip right on past.

(But if you're ever in the mood for trash, breakdowns, and side information concerning the story, that is the place for you; also, socializing! (But socializing is for the weak so eh))

3.20.16

The story should be good for anyone to read, though there might be some cursing later on.

Additional note, trigger warning?:
- Addressing insecurities and abandonment
- Isolation/suicidal thoughts
Really, it's not outright, but her thoughts themselves might imply something
- Also, breakdowns and anxiety and stuff later on

3.19.16

Going to apologize beforehand: at the beginning the writing was pretty good, and then is started to go down hill, but yeah, it picks up, sorry for that.

12.13.15

Disregard the rest of this if you feel like, but I would appreciate if you read it as an explanation.

The story is now up, started, on track, and running:

Chapter one was just put up today.

12.11.15

Hello, how's it going. So if you're a returning reader, you probably understand how much I hate Author's Notes before all of that stuff but yeah. Anyways, this was necessary.

Today is December 11th, and I will be temporarily removing Frozen Apart from the world. Or just wattpad 'cause yeah.

For the record, this story is technically completed, but needs some serious editing damage control, so that's happening.

It's going to be a lot like I'm writing the story all over again, with updates on every Sunday. Be nice, and maybe there'll be early or double updates.

You can keep up with all of this on my twitter, btw. Winter break is coming up for me, which means a lot of free time for me to write.

The original story was 36 chapters plus an epilogue spread out across maybe 40 something pages, and I'm hoping to lengthen it by a lot and do some crazy character development on it.

I appreciate constructive criticism, but no hate. And yes, Ana's name will remain Ana, and I've had to defend myself so many times on this that I'm kind of just done. If you choose to comment about that, or Jack not having white hair, or some other weird detail, I'm going to assume you're not paying attention and/or ignoring my own requests, and will therefore act accordingly.

During the course of my rewriting, this story won't be the story it was originally. I was in seventh or eighth grade when I started this, so a lot of this stuff is outdated and in desperate need of a more mature view. I'm hoping to improve this story in more ways than it just being a fanfiction.

So yeah, that's it for now, happy reading!