A Journey To The Outer World

The peak of Mount Abbarack

Anna's POV

"Jennifer hurry up it is almost dusk!!!" I said impatiently as we almost reach the top of Mount Abbarack, the mountain of Abbarack is sure very high and dark.

"Jennifer do you have any flashlight?" I ask as I scanned the moutain.

"Do you mind helping me here Grumpy?" Said Anna annoyingly as I hurried and reach for her hand.

"Hoooo, this place is creepy the tress has no leaves at all its like a tree that is used in Halloween and the grass is sure tall..." said Jennifer, fear is evident in her tone.

"Snapped it out Jen, This place is no longer a mountain it is already a forest a deep dark forest....." I said as I scanned through the place but all I see is darkness and flashlight is getting lowbat which means we can't see anymore when the flashlight runs out of energy!!!

"Anna did you hear that?" Jen said as she step backwards

"Jen don't be afraid no one will hurt you." I said sternly and squeezed her arm so she will calm down.

"No, Anna your wrong this place is dangerous.... I have read a book that contains legends and one of the legends is entitled journey to The Outer World wherein the place that contains the portal is named mountains of Abbarack that's why mountain climbers go north not south but then we went in the wrong place,and the place has an aurora of color violet..... Anna don't you see the color of this place?!?!? Said Jennifer as she squeezed my arms very tight.

I think the legend is true because everything that Anna was describing was happening but I was lost on my train of thoughts when Jennifer screamed and before I could look at it, all I see was dark and blurry vision and the last thing I knew was Jennifer collasped on the ground and all I could smell was blood, damm is this my own blood? And one thing I knew I already dozed off.

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