Trouble in Paradise

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Edit Chapter 7 by RandomnessOf Pane Vang on Saturday, July 16, 2011 at 7:04pm

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Later the next morning, when Brent woke up, Ashley was already dressed. Brent thought about the night, and then looked at her. “What did we do last night hunny?”

“Nothing really. We just kissed then went back to sleep. That’s all.”

“Oh, we didn’t have... You know right?”

“No.”

“Ok, that’s good.” Brent said and smiled.

“Yeah, well, come on, the others are i think waiting for us outside.”

“How do you know?”

“Because, they woke me up saying that.”

“Oh, i see. Well then... Let’s go.”

“Ok, But we should probably get dressed first, because um... your still not wearing a shirt.” Ashley said and smiled.

“Oh, i knew that,” Brent said getting up. “But it was on purpose. To see what you are going to do.”

“All I’m going to do... Is this,” Ashley said and went up to Brent and kissed his cheeks. “Come on, stop stalling.”

“Alright,” Brent said and smiled. They both quickly got dressed, and Brent turned around, just in time to catch a glimpse of Ashley pulling down a shirt over her bra. He turned quickly to open the door, and noticed that Max and Sam were both sitting in the living room, waiting. “Where’s Zoe?”

“She’s in the bathroom.”

“Oh, i see. Guess we wait even more.”

“Alrighty,” Ashley said and smiled. After a few minutes, they heard Zoe scream and a hard thump.

“What the heck!” Sam said and got up qiuckly. The four of them ran to the bathroom that Zoe was in quickly, and then when they opened it, a puff of smoke filled the room, Brent closed his eye’s quickly and then knelt down. He heard Ashley and Sam scream too, but Max didn’t say a thing.

“What’s going on?” Brent asked, and soon, Brent could see a shadow in the smoke. He heard Max cough, then another guy cough. Brent started making out the figures of Max and the other guy. Max was fighting. And Brent saw another guy come up. But he was holding something. An L shape thing in his hands. Brent looked again, and noticed a gun. “Max!” Brent screamed and ran into the guy holding the gun.

The man let out a groan when he was hit, and tried hitting Brent with the gun, but Brent grabbed the gun and twisted the mans arm, and kicked his triceps, making him drop the gun. The guy hit Brent and Brent didn’t move, Brent kicked the guys face, and then looked at Max, but heard a gun shot. Brent stood there stunned.

“No,” he whispered to his self. He saw Max slowly fall to the ground. Brent stared and started walking towards the shadow that shot Max. Brent started to run after him, but he soon went into the open, and Brent watched as a big van started driving away. Brent went to Max, and the smoke started evaporating. Brent stared into Max’s eye’s, as Max looked at him. Brent put his hands in Max’s hands, and he looked at Max’s wound, it hit the right side of his chest.

“I’m alright,” Max said tiredly. “These bastards are gonna pay!” He said. He looked at Brent and said, “We have to go save them.”

“I know.” Brent said. Brent helped Max up to his feet, and Brent looked down the hallway, and remembered Ashley and Zoe’s mother. He ran to there room, and then dropped to his knees.

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