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Steam billows off my skin/
Spots of moisture dot my neck/
As boiling water burns red marks into it/
The friction of my heartbeat heats me from the inside/
Flames engulf my body in the wake of your touch/
Mist gathers into drops but the fire cannot be extinguished/
A blaze moves along every valley/
Every curve and dip of the land/
And I only encourage it to do more destruction/
A breeze moves over the landscape/
But the fire warms me/
It melts everything until there's nothing left/
My whole body burns/
I don't scream out in pain though/
My body is covered in kerosene/
And he is the match that lights it/
My skin is flushed/
My hair is burnt/
My voice is hoarse/
A wildfire consumes me/
Burning down the stiff walls/
My supports collapse/
Just as I was growing weary of holding them up/
Eventually, the ignition dies down/
Until a few strings of smoke are all that's left/
Interpretation: Again with the heat analogies. Or should I say ANALogies. Yes OK this is when they had sex. It's so classy and mellow you probably didn't even realize. Stanza 1 line 3 is referring to the hickeys Michael leaves on Luke and the moisture from his lips sitting on his skin. Stanza 2 line 3 is talking about how much Luke is sweating already and how that doesn't cool him down. Stanza 3, the "blaze" is Michael's lips, moving down and all along Luke's chest and stomach. Stanza 4, the "breeze" is not only the cool draft from suddenly being naked but also a wave of self-hate from Luke's mind that makes him self conscious about his body and abilities, but Michael quickly makes him forget about that, hence how he melts everything. Stanza 5 is referring to a good kind of burn, a pleasurable kind of burn. And yes Luke is screaming out in pleasure. Stanza 7 is how Luke is fucked out and how he looks like he just jumped out of a burning building. Stanza 8 is when it happens. Luke's orgasm consumes him (another common fanfic phrase) and his "walls" that he was growing weary of supporting was him holding back his orgasm. The ignition is them like "coming down from their high" and the last line was not supposed to sound so dirty but we'll just roll with it anyway. So yeah, the few strings of smoke left over is Luke's cum on their bodies (because Michael topped).
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Fanfiction"I think you have a great smile"/ An earthquake could've happened in the moments after that and I would have failed to/ acknowledge such a catastrophe. A collection of poems written by Luke as he and Michael fall in love.
