CHAPTER FOUR THE VISIT

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ROSETTA WRITES DEBORAH TO TELL HER; SHE CAN COME AND VISIT FOR THE SUMMER. AFTER ROSETTA FINISHES STUDY HER FRIEND; SHE CALLS UPON A CARRIER WINGS TO DELIVER IT TO DEBORAH. THE DELIVERY OF THE LETTER TO DEBORAH WAS FINISH; ROSETTA WALK BACK TO THE LIVING ROOM WHERE THE OTHERS WERE TALKING. ROSETTA WALKS INTO THE LIVING ROOM WHERE THE OTHERS ARE SITTING DISCUSSION THEIR SITUATION. ROSETTA TELLS THEM; SHE FINISH STUDY DEBORAH ON COMING FOR VISIT AND ALL THEY CAN DO IS WAIT FOR DEBORAH RESPONDS. DEBORAH RECEIVES ROSETTA'S LETTER BY CARRIER WINGS AT HER HOUSE.

SHE READS THE LETTER AND PREPARES TO LEAVE FOR AMANDA'S HOUSE IMMEDIATELY. DEBORAH ARRIVES AT AMANDA'S HOUSE. SHE WALKING TO THE DOOR OF THE HOUSE WHEN SHE HEARS A VOICE; SHE TURNS AND STANDING THERE IS APPARITION.

'YOU MUST NOT ENTER.'

DEBORAH STOOD STILL WITH TERRIFY FEAR ON HER FACE. SHE DID NOT KNOW WHAT TO DO NEXT. SHE TRIED TO MOVE A STEP FURTHER TO THE HOUSE WHEN THE APPARITION APPEARED AGAIN; REPEATING THE SAME WORDS. SHE STOP IN HER TRACKS; LOOKING FOR A WAY TO REACH AMANDA'S HOUSE WITHOUT DISTURBING THE APPARITION. WHILE DEBORAH IS FIGURING OUT A WAY TO ENTER AMANDA'S HOUSE; AMANDA IS FEELING A FEAR RUNNING DOWN HER SPINAL; SHE RUNS TO THE DOOR. AMANDA OPENS THE DOOR WHERE SHE SEES DEBORAH STANDING THERE WITH FEAR WRITTEN ON HER FACE.

AMANDA ASKS DEBORAH; 'WHAT IS HAPPENING? WHY DIDN'T YOU KNOCK ON THE DOOR?' DEBORAH TURNS AND DOESN'T KNOW HOW SHE REACH THE DOOR WITHOUT MOVING. SHE WAS ABOUT TO TELL AMANDA ON WHAT SHE SAW BUT THE WORDS WOULDN'T COME OUT OF HER MOUTH. AMANDA TELLS DEBORAH TO MOVE CLOSER TO HER BUT ONE STEP AT A TIME. DEBORAH LISTENS TO AMANDA'S INSTRUCTING AND STARTS TO MOVE TOWARDS HER WHEN SOMETHING IS BLOCKING HER PATH. AMANDA GRABS FOR HER BUT SOMEONE IS STANDING BETWEEN THEM.

AMANDA TRIES TO GRAB FOR HER AGAIN BUT SOMEONE IS STILL BLOCKING HER. AMANDA ASKS HER WHAT IS GOING ON. DEBORAH REPLIES BY SAYING, 'I SAW A GHOST AND IT TOLD ME; "NOT TO ENTER" AND THE GHOST KEEPING ME FROM ENTERING THE HOUSE.' AMANDA STOPS FOR A MOMENT TO DECIDE ON HER NEXT MOVE WOULD BE BEFORE SHE PROCEEDS TO ACT ON IT. WHILE AMANDA THINKS OF OTHER PLAN TO HELP DEBORAH TO ENTER THE HOUSE, DEBORAH FEELS SOMETHING IN HER HAND. SHE SLOWLY LOOKS DOWN IN HER HAND TO SEE A PIECE OF FOLDED PAPER PLACE IN HER HAND.

DEBORAH IS VERY HESITATED BY OPENING THE NOTE BECAUSE SHE KNOWS IT WASN'T IN HER HAND, EARLY. AS SHE OPENS THE NOTE, A VOICE IN THE BACK OF HER MIND STARTING TO ALARM HER NOT TO READ THE NOTE. DEBORAH REFUSES TO LISTEN TO HER BETTER JUDGMENT AND STARTS READ THE NOTE OUT LOUD TO AMANDA AS SHE IS READING, AMANDA WASN'T PAYING ATTENTION TO DEBORAH BECAUSE AMANDA IS IN DEEP THOUGHT ABOUT A PLAN TO HELP DEBORAH TO ENTER HER HOME. THE NOTE READS; 'THIS IS NOT THE END.' DEBORAH REALIZES THAT AMANDA WASN'T PAYING ATTENTION TO HER AS SHE WAS READING THE NOTE. DEBORAH TRIES AGAIN TO GET AMANDA'S ATTENTION BY SHE CALLS OUT HER NAME.

AMANDA HEARS HER NAME BEING CALLED; SHE LOOKS UP AT DEBORAH FOR A MOMENT TO SEE WHAT SHE WANTS. DEBORAH POINTS TO THE NOTE IN HER HAND. AMANDA ASKS HER WHAT THE NOTE SAYS. DEBORAH BEGINS TO READ THE NOTE AGAIN WHEN THE NOTE SLIPS OUT OF HER HAND AND LANDS ON THE GROUND. DEBORAH IS SHOCKED ABOUT WHAT JUST HAPPEN, SHE IS ABOUT REACH FOR THE NOTE. SUDDENLY AMANDA REALIZES THIS IS GREAT OPPORTUNITY TO GRAB DEBORAH BEFORE SHE REALIZES WHAT IS HAPPENING.

AS AMANDA GRABS FOR DEBORAH WITH AMANDA ASKS HER WHERE IS THE NOTE HANDS, DEBORAH DIDN'T HAVE TIME TO REACT TO WHAT IS HAPPENING TO HER OR HAVE TIME TO REACH FOR THE NOTE. AFTER AMANDA GRABS DEBORAH INTO THE HOUSE, SHE TELLS AMANDA, SHE DOESN'T HAVE THE NOTE. SHE TELLS HER THE NOTE IS STILL OUTSIDE. DEBORAH WANTS TO RETRIEVE THE NOTE HERSELF. AMANDA TELLS HER, SHE IS CLOSER TO RETRIEVING THE NOTE THEN SHE IS SO AMANDA WALKS OVER TO WHERE THE NOTE IS LAYING AND ABOUT TO PICK UP THE NOTE. THE NOTE DISAPPEARS IN A PUFF OF SMOKE BEFORE AMANDA COULD RECOVER THE NOTE.

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