My care bear

Chap.1

Wow.
First day of high school is tomorrow. We ( me, my twin, my three best friends, my two close friends and my older brother) are at a beach, the beach that my older brother Christian brought us too. "Man summer flew by" my close friend Devin said and I said "yeah but a lot of stuff happened". "Yeah like you working your ass off for your six pack " Marlene whispered to me from in front of me "and you breaking up with Rico like I didn't even see that coming I thought you really liked him. What  happened??" Sebastian said. And Marlene slapped his arm and I laughed, but than got serious and said "ok um everybody make a circle" and they did. I made a took a big breath and said "So on the last day of school I went to north to surprise Rico and I caught him cheating on me with some girl that I haven't seen before " they all gasped expect for Paola, Marlene, and Peyton. My twin Alex stood up and said " oh I am going to kick  his ass " and I stood up quickly because I know that Rico was on the beach and said " no he doesn't know I know he just thinks he got dumped for no reason" and even when I said that both of my brothers looked like they wanted him in the hospital. "Trust me if she won't let me and Peyton kick his ass she won't let you" Marlene said getting up.

Everyone stood up and put my hand on hip when I saw my brother glaring the direction I know Rico is in while the others are making small talk and than all of a sudden Paola gasped and I said "what's wrong" " oh n-othi-ng um-mm-m lets go swim-m-ing the sun will be gett-ing lo-w soon" she stuttered I look and her funny but just nodded and everybody else agreed.

So I and the other girls waited until the boys had there shirts off for me to say, "ok boys me and the girls have been working out asses off for six packs and well I got some but Peyton and Paola and Marlene are really really fit so look" and with that we took off our towels and Devins and Sebastian's eyes widened at the site of Peyton and Marlene, and I think I saw Paola blushed under Alex's gaze. I laughed and we are wearing two piece bikinis mine black with white stripes,  Marlene's all black, Paola's pink with white stripes and Peyton's blue with black stripes. My brothers were proud of me and my six pack and then we all looked at each other then it was like we could read each other's mind because we started  running to the water at the same time.

We played in the water for hours then went home. Where we were yelled at for being past curfew, but it was totally worth it. I fell asleep quickly when I got home.

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So that was the first chapter and like I said before I am not that good of a writer but I am trying to get better.
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