Don't Let Me Go (One Direction Fanfic)

Chapter 9

Harry's POV

"Louis we need to get home now!" I say with panic in my voice. "What's wrong babe?" Louis asks. "Well you know how Liam broke with Danielle? Well her dad is the one who shot Liam." I say. "Really?" Louis asks, I nod. We get in the cab and head home. When we walk inside, everything is dark. The curtains are closed and all the lights are turned off. "Liam?" I call throughout the ghost like home, my home.

"Yea?" I hear coming from his room. I open the door. He's lying on his back on his bed staring at the celiling. "Are you okay?" I ask. "No I'm not okay. The girl I broke up with, her dad shot me! Just cause I broke her heart. I just didn't have feelings for her anymore! Doesn't mean he had to try to kill me!" Liam says clearly mad. "Listen mate. He's going to get thrown in jail. Not for life but for a long time. You don't have to worry about him. It probably wasn't Danielle's fault. Maybe her dad went biserk." I say trying to calm him down. "Your right Haz. He will go into jail." He says. "You look tired Liam. Maybe you should get some rest." Louis says. He nods and lays down in the bed.  

Just then I hear a knock on the door. "I'll get it." I tell Louis. Niall and Zayn nust have went somewhere. I open the door. It's Eleanor?

"Eleanor what the hell are you doing here?" I ask. "Uh um..." She trails off. I hear Louis coming down the stairs. "Who's at the door babe?" Louis asks. Just then he sees her. "You!" He yells pointing at her. "What are you doing here?" I ask again trying to hold Louis back. "I'm here to see....... Liam." She says with a sigh. "Why are you here to see Liam?" I ask. "Uh no reason I just need to see him that's all." She says trying to get by me. But no way is she getting passed me without an explanation. "No! Just tell me!" I say. "Louis will be mad at me." She says crying. Wait she's not. "Seriously why are you here to see Liam?!?" I ask annoyed. "Um.. We a-are d-dating." She says. "WHAT YOU AND LIAM MY BESTFRIEND ARE DATING! MY BEARD IS DATING MY BESTFRIEND! WHAT THE HELL!!!" Louis screams. She just starts to cry harder. "Louis stop! It's okay Eleanor I'm not mad that your dating Liam. Just please don't break his heart." I say. She nods. I move so she can find Liam.

"Where is he?" She asks. "He's in his room, but be quiet he's sleeping. Well you can wake him up your his girlfriend and all." I say. I try to act like it's okay, but it's not. I literally hate Eleanor. She took everything away from me and Lou. I can never forgive her for that even though it is Modest's fault.

Louis' POV

Seriously out of all the girls in the world he choses Eleanor? My beard Eleanor? Well I'm going to have to get used to this. As Eleanor walks up the stairs I think of something. "Um. El. How long have you two been dating?" I ask nervous as hell. "Well about a few weeks I guess. We got together a month or so after him and Danielle broke up." She says. I nod. "Hey Eleanor can we talk sometime? I don't want things to be weird between us. I'm sorry for over reacting. I really am. I'm so sorry." I say. She walks over to me and hugs me. "I forgive you." She says in my neck. "When were you thinking about talking?" She asks. "Well how about at Starbucks later?" I ask. She nods and walks up the stairs to Liam's room.

(A/N No offense to Eleanor. She is a good person I guess but I don't mean it like she really is a beard but in my opinion she is sorry for you elounor shippers out there!)

Liam's POV

I wake up to talking. I turn around and Eleanor is sitting there on the bed trying to get me to wake up. "Hey." I say. "Hi." She says back. "I have to tell you something." She says. "What is it?" I ask starting to tense up. Could she be dying? Could she have cancer? Is she moving away? I can tell she can see me get worried. "Calm down Liam. They know. Harry and Louis know were dating." She says. "How did they take it?" I ask a little worried about the resonse she might give me. "Well Louis was really mad at first. I'm surprised you didn't wake up from his yelling. Then he appologized and wanted to talk so things aren't weird between us. I'm meeting him at Starbucks later." She says. "Well no funny buisness." I say jokingly "No not at all Louis just wants make things so it's not weird between us." Eleanor says. I nod. I look down at my wristwatch. "Hey El, if you wanna meet Lou at Starbucks you should go now." I say. She nods and pecks my lips. "Bye." She says. I nod and wave and she walks out of the room.

Eleanor's POV

I walk down the stairs and notice Harry sitting at the kitchen counter reading the newspaper or something. "Louis at Starbucks?" I ask. "Yea he left about 5 minutes ago." He says. I nod. I get in my car and drive to Starbucks. When I get there Louis is sitting at a table, coffee in his hand. I stare at him for a moment, remembering all the times that werent so fun but we did have some fun times. The way he looks. Blue crystal eyes, brown hair swiftly cascaded across his for head, the way his nose always scrunches up when he laughs. Everything. I do miss him but I don't like him in that way, I just miss having his company, and his bubbly personality. I walk over and order my coffee and sit across from him. 

"Hey El." He says. "Hi." I say. "So what did you wanna talk about?" I ask. He looks up from his coffee and his blue eyes meeting mine. "I just want to tell you I'm sorry. I'm sorry for all the things I said to you when you came over earlier. When I saw you cry it broke me. I hate seeing girls cry. I just want you to know I want to be friends. I want you to be happy. Please be good to Liam. He just broke up with his first love and he doesn't need another heartbreak right away. El. Your so sweet and kind. And Liam deserves a girl like you. So all I ask is not to hurt him, please, and like I said I'm sorry." He says. I smile. "Thankyou Lou. It means something that you feel bad. Ya know I never wanted to be that girl to cover up a relationship, but I had to. I'm sorry also for hurting you and Harry. I'm sorry Lou. It hurt me everyday to know that I was killing you and Harry. But I guess I did have feelings for you. But that doesn't matter now, I love Liam Louis, I really do. I love him so much it hurts. Being without him for a day or more hurts. And I promise I won't hurt him. Promise." I say. He nods and smiles.

"El. I can tell you love him. The way your eyes looked when you talked about him, is the way Harry's looked when he talked about me when we were younger and still today. And I do to. It's a feeling that's new everytime. You really never know what love feels like until you feel it for the first time. The way your palms sweat when your near them and your heart feels like it's gonna fly out of your chest and the way you get butterflies in your stomach. It's just the feeling of love and you cab't help who you fall for you just do." He says. I smile. I look at my phone and I realise I'm late for work. "Sorry Lou but I got to go. See ya." I say standing up, he stands up and he gives me a hug. I pull back and smile, he smiles to. I say bye one more time and then I throw my coffee away and go out to my car. I still can't believe I sat with him and talked. Not the couple way like a friend way and that made me happy.

Louis POV

I walked out and went back home. It was good to talk to Eleanor again. It was good to know we can still be friends and not make it awkward. He opened the front door. "So how did it go?" Liam asked as I opened the door. "Yea were friends, I promise everything is cool." I said. "Okay good I wasn't sure. I would want you to be okay with it." Liam said. "Seriously man, it's alright." I said and gave him a hug. "Hey. Do you know where Harry is?" I asked. "Um, yea I think he's in the bathroom." Liam said walking into the iving room. "Okay thanks." I said running up the stairs. I noticed the bathroom door was unlocked. I knocked. "OKay Haz I'm coming in." I said that because we've seen eachother naked so we just warn eachother and then walk in. But I wished he would have said something first because I wish I could unsee what I just saw.

END OF CHAPTER NINE BBY!!!!! HOPE YOU LIKED IT - Amanda :)

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