Hello @HaleyDana! First of all, your book is catching to me, and yes, I am in love with the prologue. Your vocabulary is excellent, phrase and word usage are perfect. And sorry if this review is a bit short, because I'm tired and feeling lazy while writing this. Good job for doing the Prologue!
And because your book is a bit long, I will review others' books while doing yours, not saying your book is not worth reading, but I just want some time to review others' books and also work on my new book coming out, Assassin's Denied Love.
YOUR STORY IS EPIC!
I love Destiny, she is very similar in which in some terms of me, but much sadder background. I pity Destiny a lot, and also your book is so Epic! Matthew is quite a fine character created, and not too similar to other guys provided in other books I read before.
My heart was touched when I read this, but I was close to smacking my computer screen when I discovered Lizzie was Destiny's mother. Seriously, if I was Destiny, I would have killed myself long ago than bear this. Destiny is a really strong girl.
Hayden is ok for me, sometimes I hate his personality. My heart almost broke a shard when Destiny's life was almost wrecked. Matthew had a dark childhood. Your story is really good, and please consider publishing it into a really paperback book!
If you do, send me the link I would seriously buy the book. I love this story so much!
KEEP UP THE FABULOUS WORK!
bloodydirewolf xox
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