[[First chapter with a fight seen so advice is appreciated]]
When I wake up up I see I'm surrounded by dark stone walls the room itself is very sparse and is filled with only the hay pile I am currently on.
I get up and walk towards the bared door and peer through the bars to see a man in bright armor wearing a silver colored hood and wearing a giant sword on his back.
"What's going on?" I ask barely able to keep my voice from trembling.
He just glances coldly "Silence prisoner!"
I go and sit on the pile of hay and wait.
A few boring hours later and I hear yelling and go to the door and see it's unlocked, i glance around to see if the guard it around and see the corridor is deserted, I step into the corridor and look for an exit, down one way is a dead end and the other way leads to the yelling, I decide to take the chance and walk towards the yelling, I find a flight of stairs and at the top I see a group of five guards each wielding those giant swords surrounding a girl wearing a dark hood and dark leather armor.
She is weaving her way in and out of the group with twin daggers in each of her hands, she jumps and stabs on man through the neck and without retrieving that dagger she lands and slices another's throat, she then grabs one of the fallen guards swords and uses its size to generate enough momentum to cleave another guard in two, she throws her dagger at one of the last two guards and sweeps the legs of the other, as the last guard is on the ground she stomps on his throat breaking it, I look at her in amazement until in hear footsteps behind me I turn to see a cloaked figure, and then blackness filled my vision.
~~Sorry for the short chapter but well I'm pretty sure you didn't think you were going to even get a chapter and well neither did I but I was just looking through wattpad today and was just struck by motivation and well here it is also if you didn't notice I went back and edited and restructured the last two chapters as well~~

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Rise From Shadows
SonstigesThis is my first book so criticism and advice is welcome, also mild swearing is expected. Ryan Jameson is a normal high-school nobody until he wishes for a life of glamour and is taken to a new world where strength decides, he encounters monsters, n...