kidnapped by one direction

part 5

Laura's pov

while I was thinking about Harry I heard someone out side I peeked outside my room to see who was out side but no one was their....... I closed the door and went to the shower I jumped in and started to think about my family and being stuck with one direction...I started to cry wanting to get out of here I am scared that later after I trust them they might take my v card. I got out after a 30 min shower I wrapped my self in a towel. then walked out to see Harry sitting on my bed looking at me with his eyes full of lust, want, and anger was still in his eyes but he was to distracted to realize he was mad

Harry pov

I saw Laura in nothing but a towel and every thing else in the world disappeared I looked at her long legs then she started to call my name.

"what oh um sorry I will come back in a little bit" that was all I could say. I felt embarrassed.did I seriously stutter and stare at her.

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Laura's pov

I got dressed in shorts and a tank top and laid down in the bed trying to get some sleep when I was about to fall asleep I heard a soft knock on the door I got it but before I could think I felt someone hug me..

    "um um what's wrong??"I asked trying to calm the person down which I think is Louis I heard him sniffle and try to speak but I could barely heart him so I asked again and I heard it clear this time.

     "i-i-I got d-dumped by my girlfriend because she saw your jacket in my room"

ok this story sucks ok tell me if I should keep writing or just quit.....