Chapter Two

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Thanks to everybody who read my fanfic you guys don't know how much this means to me to have people actually see my work. And for that here's another chappie :)

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Chapter 2|| Brooklyn's POV

*The next morning*

I woke up to the smell of chocolate chip pancakes. Mmm, my favourite! I guess El's mom got home last night since she had a late night shift. I stretched my arms as the aroma of eggs and bacon also flood my nose. This is going to be a good day. I walk up to El's window and see Marcel. He was was gelling his hair down as usual.

He caught me staring and just looked down at the floor. Aww is he blushing? He's such a cutie.

As I decided that as much I woyld love to stare at Marcel all day, I needed to eat something so I marched downstairs to see Eleanor's mom, Kim Calder cooking breakfast. She is literally the nicest woman ever .

"Good morning, Kim" she never let's me call her Mrs. Calder because she says it makes her feel old, but in all honesty, she looks young.

"Hello dear. Would you like some breakfast?" She says as she's about to grab some plates.

"Yes please!" I said trying to keep my cool since I really loved food but miserably failed.

'Ok, go wake up the girls and tell them breakfast is ready" she signalled me to go upstairs to wake up those sleepyheads.

I arrive in the room and the girls are still sound asleep. I lightly tapped El's shoulder.

"Eleanor, get your arse up" I said and shook her. "Five more minutes or hours" El mumbled into her pillow.

"Louis texted you!" I say in an obnoxious voice like the sluts at our school.

"WHAT?!" she says a she quickly sits on her bed, searching for her phone. Haha, revenge for screaming in my ear.

"It was a joke El!" I managed to say in between my laughs. "You're mean." she said with a disappointed expression and her arms across her chest acting like a little child who didn't get chocolate.

Eleanor fancied Louis Tomlinson, one of the best football players at our school but he had a girlfriend named Brittany, one of the stupid hoes at our school. (A/N: By football I mean soccer and I just quoted Nicki Minaj :p )

I brought El into a warm hug as she let out a few sobs. "I'll never be good enough for Louis..." she trailed off followed by a heart-wrenching sob.

I was truly sorry. "Don't say that! I'm so sorry Ellybear that I tricked you" I started tearing up as well. We stayed in this position for a while as I remembered that breakfast was ready. "Let's wake the girls up and we can go downstairs and eat. Sounds good?"

She nodded her head as she wiped away her tears. As we woke up the girls, I accidentally tripped over Veronica's gigantic teddybear her brother Leeroy gave to her and fell face first. Ouch that hurt, suddenly everything went black.

Eleanor's POV

Me and Brooklyn were in the process of waking up the girls, when suddenly Brooklyn tripped over Veronica's stuffed teddy and fell face first. Ouch! I started laughing hysterically at her while I was slapping my hand on my desk. But she wasn't getting up.

"Brooklyn?" no answer

"Brooklyn?!" no answer

"Brooke?!" still no answer

"MOM! HELP!" I screamed to my mom downstairs to help me and the other girls with Brooke as the girls and I laid Brooklyn on my bed.

"What's the problem?" she said in a soothing voice. "Brooklyn is unconscious but, she's still breathing." I said on the verge of tears.

"Ok don't worry, I'll call an ambulance right away. Don't worry it's going to be okay." My mom said as she took her cell out. Now I was full on crying the same for the other girls.

"Please Brooklyn, wake up..." I said as I heard faint sirens in the distance. I hope she's ok...

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