Is He The Right One??

Chapter 10

Yoandri POV
It all worked out. Vane knew the truth but it hurted me seeing her sad because of Alonso. I had to cheer her up somehow.
Yoyo: Hey lets go hang out somewhere
Vane: Nah I just want to go home
The girls: Us too
Alondra: Babe can I go with them. You can have a night out with guys
Zabdi: You sure babe
Alondra: Yea
Zabdi: Ok goodnight mami
Alondra: Goodnight baby
The girls leave
Yoyo: Well what should we do now
Joel: Lets go to the club
The guys: Yea lets go
Alonso POV
We went to change at the hotel. We had planned a suprise for the girls and since I knew that they would be staying at the house their parents bought for them 4 years ago the suprise was going to be there. We planned to sing Me Equivoque. We got to the house and I started shouting.
Alonso: VANE I LOVE YOU PLEASE FORGIVE ME
She came out on the balcony with the rest of the girls which was good because the guys wanted to sing for them.
Vane: What do you want
Alonso: Your forgiveness
Yessi: Ok then what are the other guys doing here
Jos: We came to show you guys WE LOVE YOU GUYS
Alonso: Can we show you guys
Vane: Fine
Thats when we started singing Me Equivoque

When we finished singing Vane was crying and the girls look like they were about to cry.
Alonso: Please forgive me Vane I love you
Vane: Idk
Alonso: Ok then please just forgive me
Vane: Ok i forgive you
Jos: Yessi Can you give me a chance
Yessi: A chance for what
Jos: To be your boyfriend
Yessi: Im sorry but I have a boyfriend
Jos: Then be my friend
Yessi: Fine
Alan: I guess you all have boyfriends right??
Katya: Yea
Marco: Can we all be friends then and forget what happend
Alondra: Of course but now I have to go
The girls: Ok bye
Marco: Do you want me to give you a ride
Alondra: I'll just call Zabdi
She called him but he wasn't answering.
Alondra: He isn't answering
Marco: So do you want me to take you
Alondra: Sure Bye guys
Everyone: Bye
Skip car ride
Alondra POV
Alondra: Well we're here thanks
Marco: No problem
I got out of the car and started walking to the house. Me and Zabdi lived together. When I opened the door I heard noises. I was thinking that Zabdiel was here. I went upstairs but before I opened the door I heard moaning. This couldnt be happening. I opened the door. Thats when I saw her. Her arms were around his neck. Her legs around his waist. She was asking for more and he gave her more. I cleared my throat. They both turned around.
Zabdi: Alondra?!
He said while getting off of her and coming towards me.
Alondra: Dont touch me
Zabdi: I can explain
Alondra: There's nothing to explain. I'll come for my things tomorrow
Zabdi: Dont leave me I love you
Alondra: If you loved me you wouldnt be fucking your ex
Zabdi: Im sorry babe Dont leave me
He said while he was on his knees crying.
Alondra: You should've thought about that first. Its too late to say sorry.
I turned around and left him crying. Once I got out of the house I started crying. I saw Marco waiting in his car. He saw me crying. He got out of the car.
Marco: Whats wrong Alondra?!
Alondra:*crying* Zabdiel cheated on me!!
Marco: WHAT?! Follow me
We went in the house and saw them together but Zabdi was crying. He looked up and saw us. He looked mad.
Zabdi: Alondra! What is he doing here
Marco: I came to teach you how to respect a beautiful girl
He tackled Zabdiel and started punching him. Zabdiel pushed him off and started to punch him back.
Alondra: Stop!! Guys!!
I was trying to take Zabdiel off of Marco when Zabdiel hand came toward my face and he slapped me!! I fell to the floor and hit my head on the wall. All I could hear were people screaming my name and thats when everything went black.
Vane POV
Me and the girls were ready to go to sleep when I got a call.
Vane: Hello?
Nurse: Hi am I speaking to Vanessa?
Vane: Yes how can I help you
Nurse: Im calling from ____ Hospital informing you that Alondra is here.
Vane: WHAT?! What happend?
Nurse: She hit her head and she is in a coma. Please come immediately.
Vane: Yes we'll be there in 10 minutes. Thank you
Yessi: What happend?
Vane: Alondra is in the hospital
The girls: What?!
Vane: Lets go
Skip to hospital
Right when we walked into the room we started crying. She was connected to lots of machines. I saw Zabdi crying too.
Vane: What happend?
Zabdi: ..........
Yessi: WHAT HAPPEND?!
I saw Marco enter right in that moment.
Marco: Zabdiel cheated on her in their own house and in their own bed. Thats when I got mad and went in the house and we started fighting and then Zabdiel slapped her on accident.
Yessi: ZABDIEL!!! How dare you cheat on her! You guys have been going out for 5 years!!
We had to hold Yessi so she wouldnt go and beat Zabdi up. He even backed away because he knows that Yessi was angry.
Zabdi: Im sorry ok? I didnt know what I was doing.
Vane: Well sorry isnt going to help now.
At that moment the doctor came in and told us that he didnt know how long Alondra would be in a coma so we had to wait. She might also forget about somethings. I know that Alondra wasnt going to forgive Zabdiel. But one thing for sure Zabdi and Marco were going to fight for heart. And they both werent going to give up that easily too.