A Night To Remember

Hi, this is my first book so I hope you all like it 

Yeah... this story sucks to be honest. It was my first story written so my other stories are much better...

"Hey kiddo time for your first day of school" my mum said. "is that you mum" I said groggily. " of course it is who do you think it is?" She said. "I....don't know? Maybe my boyfriend Harry," I said " so what you are saying is that I sound like a boy?!?!" My mum yelled "no I never said that and if you think that then NO I am just saying that it sounded like Harry" ( Oh goodness what have I got myself into)

Well I am at school now and I see my boyfriend Harry so I walk up to him "Hi babe how are you?" I asked but he sorta didn't look like himself. "Hi but my name is Marcel sorry. Looks like you got me mixed up with someone," Marcel said "By the way I am new do you mind showing me around?" "Um sure no problem" I said So then I showed around the whole school and showed him all his classrooms. "Thank you so much.... Sorry but, what is your name?" Marcel asked "Emily, my name is Emily Ashley Dawson" "Wow that is such a lovely name, Too bad you have a boyfriend or I would ask you out to dinner," Marcel said. "Aww Marcel that is so sweet but I don't like you in that kind of way I am so sorry Marcel." (Oh my gosh I know that he is gonna cry.) I said
"Oh well see you later Emily" Marcel said running off crying.
Oh goodness what will I say to harry? "I made a nerd cry?!?!" Oh my I wish I would of said that maybe in the future we could hook up if things don't work out with me and harry? What the fuck I am such a bad person!
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UGGGH I am such a horrible writer plz comment and I hope that this will get a lot of reads.