MGDeLeon

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hmm..let see a writer with complicated story, I read almost all her finish work, and i say that she is not that good, she still need to improve her grammars and sentences, her story is quite mess up if you dont read it carefully, you'll get confuse whose character is talking and what's that character thinking, but whom Am I to judge, just like what I wrote, I myself are not good with letters and words, so no offense ment dear author, you got a good story plot but you still need a lot of things to improve first is your sentence construction and then how  your characters will interact towards each other, and your characters pov, you can create a good story, cause you got a plot and good storylines, so keep writings and improve your writing skills.

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>stiil typing<

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