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this can't be happening

Shanes P.V.O

we search for kier and drew for ages but carnt find them eniwhere, me and laurence sit on a park bench thinking of where they could be we hear police sirens and see a car chase going on. "wonder what all thats about"laurence mutters i see the car cum flying arond the corner and slaming into a post i see the gint billbord post thing cum flying towords us with a lode of shraknall and evrthign gets qwiter and blury soon everthing gose black.

Luke P.V.O

my phone is lighting up flashing vibrating just going crzy so i look at the screen i see shane and anser starte away a strange voice ansers

phone call:

luke:hello

phone:hello is this mr Illingworth

luke:yhes wheres shane

phone:we are affrede shane and the man with him have been in a terable incodent we would aprecheate if u could infor poeple who should be informend famaly ect. and come to the hospitle as soon as posable

luke:ok erm yhe ill be there strate away

phone:thank you for youre time bye

luke:bye

phone : beep beep beep

in shock i search for the van keys and run to the van and jump in and get to the hospitle as fast as posable but at the trafficlights i see a tall read haird man and a small mouse brown man i realise its drew and kier i beep my horn but dosent work i grab kier as he walks past "what the oh hey luke" "kier get in ill tell u why and where on the way there oh hey drew" luke exsplaed the situation and got to the hospitell

Kier P.V.O

i get grabbed from a van but realise its luke we hop in the van and luke tells us the sercustanses i worry about loaurence more than shane trying not to cry i just stay quite and fiddel with my fingures.the drive was awkward and silent and semed to last forever.we arive at the hospitle entrance me and drew jump out while luke finds somewhere to park. i run up to the desk " hello my frends got admitted erlier on today" the women behind the desk said "names please" "erm laurence beveridge and shane summers" there currentlly in a unfit state for viseturs other than famaly" "but we basiclly are the closist thing they have to famally" "sorry sir but no viseters" drew looks shy and uncumfatable but replyes to the women behind the desk "im shanes boyfreand dose that change eniting" the women lokssuprised erm yess but there still not in a good state" "i dont care let me see him" "its down the corridor to the right 3rd room on the left" "thnak you" drew ran down the corridore almost falling but just managing to stay stable.I just sit and weight for Luke to enter the hospital but not once did Laurence leave my mind.