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[ Harry's POV ]
I woke up and Max wasn't next to me anymore.
Then moaning started to come from the kitchen.
"Faster Louis!" Max's voice yelled.
Louder moaning started to come . I jumped out of the bed towards the door, tripping on the way. That bastard of Louis!
"What in the bloody hell!!" I yelled.Running into the crime scene. The rest of th boys came rushing in behind me.
Max face was stuffed with carrots and nutella,which Louis seened to be feeding to her!!
"Its not what it looks like!!"Max seemed to be trying to get out, but all of the carrots that were stuffed down her throat seemed to be making it a problem.
All of the boys gasped in relief. Even Louis, which might have been because he thought I was going beat him bloody.
Which I was going to...because...you know...I thought they were doing something.... else...
"Explain?"" Liam said. Unsecure if he actually wanted to know.
"Well...I was...feeding Max...dipped Nutella carrots?" Louis asked.
Max swallowed. Staring at us with those huge blue eyes of hers.
I cant belive I found her alone in the rain. I wanted her so badly. I kind of JUST had her a few hours ago...but still.
The boys rolled their eyes and left.
Louis dipped another carrot into the Nutella.
"I'm going to regret this." He said to himself. Then did the most unexpected thing: he shut his eyes...and...ate it.
He chewed a bit. Then opened his eyes. Swollowing. His face turned into a huge grin.
"This is...THE BEST THING EVER!!!!" He yelled.
Stuffing his face with Nutella and carrots. Seriously, he wasn't even bothering to actually dip them.
Max and I just stood there staring at his "reaction".
"He's so crazy" Max whispered to me over Louis's yells of amazement.
"He reminds me of myself" she said.
Louis ran away screaming meaning that Max and I were alone.
[ Max's POV ]
"Why weren't you next to me when I woke up?" Harry asked out of the blue.
Damn! I got hungry dude!
"I got hungry" I simply said.
He seemed embarrased. Seriously this boy is TOO serious about everything!!
I crashed my lips into his. We stood there kissing for a few seconds.
"Don't overreact about stuff Styles" I smiled at him.
He smiled back.
BEEP!
BEEP!
BEEP!
A phone! I hate phones.
"Gotta take this babe" he told me. Answering the phone.
"Hello?" he said.
"Yeah. Oh. Okay. Well you see I have a guest. Yeah. Okay. Hmmm. Tonight? Fine. See you at 9." he said dully, and hung up.
Manners! He didn't say "Bye!" or "Have a nice day!" How disrespectful!
"Hey Max?" Harry asked.
"Yeah..." I said.
"Do you want to be my date for a... party tonight?"
I thought for a minute.
Okay. So if I'm his date that means I'll have to go to a party. But if I'm not his date, then I'll just have to stay here and do nothung for the rest of the evening and night.
"But I don't have a dress" I told him.
"That can be solved."He said with a smirk.
Next thing I know we're parked outside the biggest place I've seen on my life...except you know their house.
"Where are we?" I asked them.They all laughed.
"Aren't you supposed to be a girl?" Zayn said.
Seriously what was this place!
I stuck my tongue out at them.
"It's the MALL!" Louis exclaimed.
Mall...what the fudge is a Mall!!????It's as if I told them we were at Chinconcuac. They wouldn't have a fucking idea what it is, or were it is!!
"Okay?" I said.
"It's a place with a bunch of stores were girls obsess over." Liam told me.
Ohhhh.
We hoped out of the car. Walking towards the Mall.
"So how much can we spend?" I asked them, embarassed.
They all laughed.
"What?!?" I asked.
"Lets say...as much as you want"Harry said.
"How come?" I asked.
"You'll find out some day" Niall said with a wink.
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