What NOT To Do When Writing Werewolf Stories

Chapter 1 My Mate is Here

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-Lilith POV-
I'm Lilith, I was a normal 14 year old until...I found out that I was a kitten shifter. I'm the only one in the family. Nobody knows except the family that lives with me.
-Aaron POV (aka Lilith's mate)-
"I can smell her..." my wolf was getting out of hand. I could smell my mate but she never was there.
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Funny that song has always reminded me of my mom. "Go look for her again... you know she's out there" My brother Jeremy gave me a call, God he's annoying. "Yes Jeremy?" Jeremy said "Bro you have to hurry. I think our Luna is in trouble!" I start to freak out. I can sense her, she's hurt, crying, and cold. "Whoever did this is going to pay!" I thought this to myself over and over again. Than I start to shift, it doesn't take long considering my mate is in trouble.
-Lilith POV-
I stare out my window. All I see is a boy calling someone, that's when I finally saw the wolf in the woods about to attack him. I think of some thing to do, all I can think of is changing into my cat form. "I know I'm a teenage lioness but still." I say this to myself before running out the door and shifting. *note this is before she started the fit. Jeremy is the boy she saw, but he was talking to a friend NOT his brother* As I attack the wolf I see that it's not attacking back. I growl "What are you doing on my territory!" No reply. Then I smelled it, the sweet smell of coconut. "My mate is Here" my my lioness growled. The wolf looked up I could tell he smelled the scent of vanilla. "Do you smell it too?" The best he could do is nod I gestured to let him know to leave. I kept telling myself "I know who he smelled, and it wasn't me." My Mate wasn't him. I shifted because my lioness had become fatigued. It was already pouring, but I didn't have the strength to get up.