Can i say "us"?

Hey guys! i just wanna let you know that this is my first time to write here. I'll be glad to hear your comments and suggestions about the things i need to improve. Don't worry about what I’ll feel, I’m open to criticisms i receive!

And Filipina po ako so I know how to speak Filo.

Tagalog din po ang story.

and now without further delay,

This is it!

PRESENTING..

*drum rolls*

CAN I SAY "US"?

Prologue

[Natalie and her guy best friend, Alex ended having fun on one of the coolest clubs in the city, but that fun was barried because unexpectedly, they were caught by a "who".

That "who" is Nat's father.

Alex then escaped from the place leaving Natalie alone and was humiliated by her father, Mr.Parker.

She understand the reason why did her best friend leave. She knew it's best for him to go ar else he'll be hit my her father's tight fist.]

"Nat!" Hello? Yer not paying attention again!"

"Oh, ano yun? What was it again Stace?" napatingin si Natalie sa kanyang kaibigan..

"Ugh. Sabi ko, ang-cute nang guy na yun. Do you think he'll like me if i'll talk to him?" sabay turo sa lalaki

"Seeesh! Stop it Stace, We don't have time for that. Mag-aral muna tayo."

Both of them laughed. Si Stace o si Stacey Sanchez ay kababata ni Nat. Luckily, naging magkaklase pa din sila hanggang college.

"You're thinking of him again right?” tinuro ni Stacey ang damit na suot ni Natalie.

"Well what else should i think of? It's like, he already erased me from his list. or should i say, gusto niya talaga akong kalimutan." Nat's blooming aura then faded. "Kailan ba ako ulit magkakaroon ng freedom?! Mas mabuti pang tumira nalang ako ulet sa America kasama ni mommy." Nag pout siya at umiwas nang tingin sa kanyang kaibigan.

“Now yer talking like you'll gonna have a drama scene on a blockbuster movie Nat! Calm down, iiwan mo naman ba ako dito?  chill. Marami pang guys jan, baka mamaya na nga kayo ipagtatagpo ni lord.” At nag peace sign ito sa kanya. 

*riiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnggggg*

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Well, wacha think guys? :) Sorry trying hard kasi akong writter. Pero i'll try my best to make this story great :)