This is a poem I wrote a while ago but just now published it on here. Suggestions?
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Raindrops pelt onto the ground
Each one is a problem I cannot solve
They started as just a few
One occasionally here and there
But they are growing in number
I try to fix them but with attempt I fail
Each fail results in more
Soon they are piled up to my ankles
I slosh through the mud
Looking for a light to guide me
But there is nothing
The sheets of rain are just too thick
I am lost
With nothing
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The World Through My Eyes
PoetryThis is just poems I write about my thoughts and feelings about life, as well as other stuff. Feel free to share any and all constructive criticism. /#388 in Poetry 5-11-16/
