Imortal Assassin

Chapter 7

3 rd person POV

the day was hot, as Aphmau checked on everyone as they set up the party a figure lurked outside the gates someone who may not be allowed

Aphmau's POV

i was checking on Cadenza when Brian came in panicked "quick lady Aphmau theres someone who wants you" he said with fear and panic in his eyes, i rushed over to the gate and saw Laurence and Garroth at the gate "WHERE IS SHE" yelled the voice "who are you"  he looked like (image above)             "I HAVE COME FOR TRIXY THE-" he stopped and glared at the girl behind us. the person wore a black cloak so we could't see who it was "go" the voice said "PRINCESS YOUR" "GO" she screamed. his eyes went black "i have come to bring you back and if you won't come he will come for you himself" he explained "never" suddenly she leaped over the gate and landed behind him "go" the voice said "never" "then we battle" the person said. she pulled out a massive sword and slashes at him but he doges as they fight a voice echoes in my mind is look over to Garroth and he has the same reaction as me "Lord Aphmau whats happening?" he screamed "WHEN WE MEET AGAIN" he screamed "WHEN WE MEET AGAIN" the person said back as he floated off into mist.

Your POV

i will have to explain won't i?, not unless they catch me "WHO ARE YOU" Laurence asked "no one special just... a miss understood girl who wants peace and freedome" you say walking off "please tell us who you are" said Aphmau "i'm sorry" you said as you walked suddely your walk turned into a jog and the jog turned into a run and soon enough you were sprinting past trees, you look behind you and see Aphmau you stop at a clearing, "PLEASE tell me" she said "no" "please" she said "this is where we last met" you say "you its you""yes its me, theres things in this world who want my head just because i'm not understood I JUST WANT FREEDOM BUT MY PAST CREEPS UP TO ME AND MAKES THE PEOPLE AROUND ME HATE ME FOR WHO I DONT WANT TO BE" you scream as tears steam down my cheeks "*sigh* this is my destiny and if you want to help me you giving yourself a death wish" you explain suddenly you feel a hand on your shoulder "sweetie... i will give myself a death wish if its for the good of you" she says with a smile, she slowly takes off my hood and revels my real face, no scars, no cuts, and no bruises just my <hair colour> hair and my <eye colour> eyes "<n-name>?" she stutters "you probably think i'm a monster now huh?" you say looking away from her kind Hazel eyes. "<name> you are a member of my village and i will never let you down even if your  a shadow night" she explains, i give her a joyful smile and hug her

please tell me if you are enjoying it and i if i need to improve anything (no the , or . because i know of them and i know i turn it from you to me from her to um me)