Kidnapped on the way Home(On hold)

Chapter 1

Ok first wanna say great thanks to:

JustAmay

bacutie4eva

Ace-Of-Hearts

& last but certainly not least!

Fallzswimmer

For the permission to write this story (even though they said I really didn't even need it)

AND for being absolutely awesome!

Ok important stuff.

I've had this in my head for a while, and I thought that I'd just write a short blurb to see what everyone thinks of it, so If you like it you MUST comment and/or vote, otherwise I won't continue.

So the future of this story is solely on you, the reader!

To the blurb!

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Chapter 1 

It all happened on the island of Hermoso, which means "beautiful," and let me tell you, beautiful doesn't even desribe it. It had lush green valleys, high mountaintops, but the best part was the little village that inhabited this island. The village was made of stone, literally. Every building was made out of stones, the best part of the village, was the castle. The castle was inhabited by the Rico Family, or better known to the people as the Royal Family.

I am not royal, nor do I even look royal-but somehow I belonged here in this castle, with the handsomest men I've ever seen. I, Adelina, grew up on the streets. Moving from foster family, to foster family.

That one night on the way home from my job at the little diner down the street, changed my life forever. That was the night I was kidnapped on my way home. That was the best thing that could have happened to me.

But, that's in the past. I am now awaiting my wedding day, where I can literally marry the Prince of my dreams.

While slipping into my beautiful wedding dress, I looked at all the scars I had aquired over the years. The one underneath my wrist was from when I burnt myself taking brownies out of the stove. The one on my upper arm was from when I leaned against a hot grill. This one on the side of my stomach, I shudder, was from when one of the princes punished me. The worst one that I have, is on my back. A long line down my whole back, from when, yet another prince...whipped me.

What I had to go through to get through those few years, but if I had to endure that pain, to get where I am now. It was worth it.



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"Bye Chickie! I'll see you tomorrow." I waved to my boss, Chickie, as I was walking out of Comida Buena, the little diner down the street.

"Bye Adelina. Oh can you come in early tomorrow to help me with the apple pies?" She said while juggling two plates of food, a jug of coke, and five bills.

"Sure thing little one." A huge smile plasters my face

"You better stop calling me that, or your going to be out of a job soon, young lady!" While shaking her chubby, little finger at me jokingly.

"You couldn't manage without me if, Chickie, and you know it."

"Humph" She scoffs

Laughing I walk out the door and start walking home when I hear Chickie talking in fluent spanish, yelling at some poor soul, about how if he doesn't eat it, he'll be wasting perfectly good food that could go to come hungry child.

I laugh even louder at her comment. Chickie always has been very outgoing, adn she definetely believes in not wasting food. Especially with me working there, she feels that she needs to show that she does care.

I pull out my Ipod and stick my headphones in turning up the volume. Not caring about the song, just wanting some noise.

As I was crossing the street, I jumped out of the way, as a big, white van almost didn't stop for me. It ended up slamming on it's brakes, while I hurried across the street. The windows of the van were tinted really dark, so I couldn 't see who was driving, but I scolwed at them anyways-knowing they can see me.

 I continue walking. Thinking about my day, when I suddenly feel two strong hands wrap around my waist, pulling me back. I quickly look back and see the white van that had almost hit me! I spun around and kicked my attacker in the gut, and ran off. I could hear one of them running behind me, gaining on me. I made my way into the alley way nearest me hoping that I could hide, but when I looked up I saw that I was in a dead end. I spun around, only to see three, large men approaching me.

I screamed.

A thick cloth was forced over my mouth and nose. I couldn't breathe.

"She's the one, I think that the masters will be pleases with her" A gruf voice said

The last thing I saw, was five beautiful faces, looking over me, before I blacked out.

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Ok guys what'cha think!

Trying this out.

---------------------------------------------------------->> Picture of wedding dress on the side!!!!!

Remember, if you want this story to continue, you must comment and/or vote, so I know that

you guys like it.

Thanks so much guys!



Also do you guys think I should do a gloassary or just put the meaning of the words next to the spanish words.



I don't know spanish my self so it was alot of research, but I like the feel of a spanish story, so thats what I'm doing.



Also Hermoso isn't a real island I just made it up :)



Bibi!