Kidnapped on the way Home(On hold)

Chapter 3

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I felt pain all over my body. So much pain, I couldn't even figure out where the main source was coming from.

I slowly opened my eyes, only to find that I wasn't on the cot in the corner of the main basement, yet in my own little room. Did I say room? Really it's a cell, complete with iron bars. Great.

Looking around I noticed that I was on a very dirty mattress on the floor. Next to the mattress, was a toilet and mini sink, and nothing else. Bare much?

I couldn't think any more. It was hurting my head too much. I clutched my head, only to pull my hand back quickly. It was covered in a red liquid.

Blood.

I gasped.

"I wouldn't keep touching it if I were you"

Turning around I saw a red headed girl.

"W-Who are y-you?" I stuttered, feeling my energy drain.

"I am Amelia, and you need my help." She said disappearing.

I could faintly hear a conversation in the next room. Next thing I know Amelia is back with what looks like ... wait what is that? Keys!

She unlocks the doors, and lets herself in. I now see that she has brought clean cloths and sheets. She turns on the water and starts cleaning away the dried blood on my head.

"Aahhh!" I screamed in pain

"I'm sorry, but I need to clean and dress the wound. Just be patient." Amelia shushes me, saying comforting words

She picks up the bloodied cloths and starts to walk out, setting the clean sheets on the now stripped mattress. Dang she works quick!

"W-wait! You have keys, you could let me out."

"No Adelina, I can't. Bruno would tell the masters that I helped his favorite prisoner escape, which would probably lead in my death. I hope you understand. I will help you though. Whatever you do, don't anger any of the masters. Just keep your mouth shut, and do what they ask. That's the best way to survive in here."

My voice refuses to work. She won't help me. She's just going to leave me here to die. How could she?

As she walks away, I stare imaginary daggers at her back. Hoping that they wouldn't be imaginary anymore, only to be disappointed again.

Again in my life, I am left here all alone, to die. Weeping softly, I didn't even here the door to my cell open.

"What's the matter?"

Looking up I see ... another hottie! Hottie #2 is different though. He has the same dark green eyes, but this hottie has blonde hair, not dark brown. Maybe their brothers?

Cowering back into my mattress, I look down at my hands. Afraid of what he might do.

Hottie #2 see's my cowering and he bends down near me. He puts his finger under my chin and lifts it up, making me look into his dark, inviting eyes.

"What is the matter? Don't be scared of me. I'm not like my other brothers, so you don't have to worry about me hurting you, as I see they have done to you." He looks at my forming black eye and the huge cut across my forehead.

"I don't want to die!" I nearly scream in his ear

"Ssh. Your not going to die. Not with me around, my name's Carlos." He shoves his hand out

I shake it softly "Adelina"

Chuckling, he lifts me up bridal style and carries me out of the cell. Past a stunned Bruno, and up the stairs. I was then blinded by sunlight. Being in a dark basement can really ruin your eyesight.

He carries me up, what feels like stairs, and down a couple hallways. I am too scared to open my eyes ... afraid of what I might see.

We enter a room, and he lays my onto a soft bed. I feel the bed dip.

"You can open your eyes now, I know your not dead." He chuckles softly obviously he thinks I'm funny.

Opening my eyes I see that I am in, what looks like the biggest bedroom I have ever seen. It's huge! Easily bigger than the orphanage I used to live in.

The room was covered in red velvet. The walls, the furniture, all covered in red velvet. Looking aorund I noticed that all the walls that weren't covered, had intricate paintings. Painted in vibrant colors, telling stories in many languages.

Looking back at Carlos, I see him smiling.

"Why are you being so nice to me?"

His face falls "Everyone deserves a friend. Even in the lowest point in their life, everyone needs kindness and friends." He stops obviously thinking

"I hate what my brothers do. I hate how they steal innocent girls for their own pleasure. That's why when they get a new girl, they don't tell me. Because they know that I will try to save her."

So Carlos and Hottie#1 were brothers! I knew it!!!

Carlos starts laughing. He's laughing so hard, that he falls off of the bed, only to stand up quickly. Obviously embarrased that I saw him fall off. I laughed at the silly look on his face.

"Yes, me and Hottie#1, or as we call him, Stefan, are brothers."

My mouth drops open. I said that outloud? Oh shoot!

"Oops, I said that outloud didn't I?"

"Yes, you did." Another chuckle.

I smile sheepishly.

I walk back over to the bed and lay down on it, not noticing until now, how tired I was.

"Sleep Adelina, I will talk to my brothers about what to do with you. You will be safe in my room, so don't leave." He walks over to the door and exits the room.

I close my eyes.

Then wake, as I hear an argument in the distance. A very loud argument.

I wonder what that's about?

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Junk I know.

Had huge writer's block.

Hopefully the next chappy will be better.

Sorry for the junky chapter.

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