Molly has been gone for 7 minutes now. What is she doing in the bathroom?
I still felt her soft, skin on my hands.
"Is she okay?" My mother asked.
"Um.. yeah yeah.. she's fine." I replied.
"She doesn't seem fine. Is everything okay with you two?" My uncle decided to ask me.
I rolled my eyes.
"Well.. um. Sadly I will have to go. It was nice meeting your girlfriend. We should go out with her again soon sometime." Jay said, getting up from the table. "Excuse me,"
Crap, another time?
I wiped my mouth with the napkin.
"Son,i think you should go check on her," my father spoke up.
I nodded, "excuse me," i said and headed for the bathroom.
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Molly's POV
I've been in here for 7 minutes.
They might be worried about me. Like I care anyway...
I was about to head out until I heard a knock on the door.
"Molly! Open the door!" It was yoandri.
I sighed. I opened the door. He was standing there, his arms and feet crossed against the wall.
"You okay?" He asked when I headed out.
Once he said that, i slapped him right across the face.
He put his hand on his cheek, his face shocked and angry.
He quickly grabbed my hand and pulled me into a room .
"What the heck is your problem?" He asked, closing the door.
"What is my problem? What the fuck is your problem? Touching me like that?" I replied.
"You were asking for it. That beautiful dress on you. I had to," he said, smirking.
"I want to go home now," i said.
I was reaching for the door knob but yoandri got in the way.
"Your not going anywhere. I need to talk to you,"
"Talk fast. Because I need to leave," i replied, crossing my arms.
"Alright, you will have to come to another date with me," he spoke up.
"No. You said it was going to be a one time thing," i replied.
"Yeah, but my uncle and my parents would like to see you again," he explained.
I rolled my eyes, "i can't just keep pretending I'm your girlfriend. I have better things to do. Now let's go,"
"We're not going to leave ," he says, "let's make a deal,"
"Ugh what?" I asked.
"You pretend to be mine for as long as we have to and I won't tell Joel about today or about the party," he said.
"You are so fuckin annoying,"
"Deal?"
I had no other choice, "fine. Deal."
He just smiled.
That's when two boys bursted into the room.
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"MI YOLI! WHAT'S UP!" A boy said, jumping onto yoandri, giving him a hug.
"Ayee!" yoandri said, hugging him back.
"Como estas?" (how are you?) the guy asked, when he let go of yoyo.
"Bien, mi yoli" (good, my yoli), yoandri replied.
The guy had brown, straight hair that was sticking up and brown eyes.
Then another not rushed in. He was tall. He had brown, wavy hair with blonde highlights, and brown eyes.
"My brother!" The tall guy said and also gave him a hug.
"y quién puede ser esta hermosa chica?" (and who may this beautiful girl be?) The guy with straight hair said.
I'm Hispanic. So I get a clue what he is saying.
"Hola," I smiled, " mi nombre es Molly Pimentel and i'm yoandri's-" (hi, my name is Molly Pimentel)
"Girlfriend," yoandri finished my sentence.
I gave him a look and he shrugged.
"Molly, this is johann," he pointed to the guy with the straight hair, "and this is Sebastian," he pointed to the tall guy.
"Hi," I smiled.
"Wow, nice to meet you," Sebastian held out his hand for me to shake. I shaked it, to be polite.
"We're just about to leave. I'll be back, imma go drop her off," yoandri said, grabbing my hand.
"Alright you go do that," seba replied
" Voy a estar esperando! y Molly gusto en conocerte," (I'm going to be waiting and Molly nice to meet you), johann smiled and I smiled back, nodding.
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I really need some opinions on my story, idk if it's good or...?
