I think the story is brilliant and is written well.
I am not sure if the intimate scene are needed as I rekcon it spoils it, and cannot be read by younger readers.
I found it a bit gross a bit to much information, I sure don't need my Girl Stuff guide! I can read it all there.
I reckon H28, has done an awesome with the characters and the scene's.
What is the plot though?
Its some times a bit unsure, I reckon it's a story that is a good read,
But is for mature audience,
I reckon I'll keep reading with hope that it won't need the scene's.
MJ
