1 - Shivering And Sweating

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Jackie Toret's POV

I make my way around the courtyard's little sidewalk on my skateboard until I see the face I saw when he first got here, this year.

Flashback

I was eating lunch in the lunchroom, breeze was blowing through the wide opened cafeteria windows. I shivered, I think I'm coming down with a cold because I started to sweat with the blazing hot, Australian air. Layla slammed her tray down sat down infront of me staring at me like a mainiac. Layla wore a white sleeveless shirt that said 'DWEEB', wiith a bubblegum pink, blue, and yellow leather jacket, she had clear leggings that looked like yellow ooze or something was dripping, I honestly don't know, she had a darker shade than the bubblegum pink jacket as her skirt with a thick black top out line and last she had big white shoes with a black bottom outline and black laces. (A/n: from the Still Into You by Paramore music video) I have a sky blue tee shirt, a denim skirt and plain black converse, nothing special.

"Jack, what's happening to you? You're shivering and sweating at the same time!" She technically screamed like I scared her. Well I didn't, so what is there to be afraid of?

"Chill Lay, I feel a little-" I started but quickly got interrupted, see, that's the thing, everywhere I go someone has to interupt me.

"Hey guys, this is Carrie. She just transferred here with her cousin Luke!" Macy came and interupted me following by a new girl, she is very pretty, like Bryana Holly type. She has beautiful blonde hair and is really skinny. Macy is like the opposite race, she has cool brown curls, like Natalie La Rose. Layla, she has been dying her hair pink and red, she is mostly like Hayley Williams. Theres me, ugly poop colored hair and terrible face, some people say I look like Barbra Palvin, but that's just an opinion, all I really care about is my opinion on me, besides, Barbra Palvin is way prettier than me. Macy was wearing a light bubblegum pink crop top, a matching skirt with another layer at the bottom with tiny cuts, (A/n: If that doesn't make sense look at the Natalie La Rose - Somebody ft. Jerimih music video, I'll put it on the top) and she had matching flats. (A/n: In the vidoe she wasn't wearing shoes with this outfit, she was just playing in the water so I made up my own.) Carrie was wearing something like me except everything was white and she had peach leggings and brown fur boots, stylish much?

"Hi, nice to meet you!" Layla smiled as I waved, smiling widely. Behind that smile are deadly regrets and tattoos everywhere on my arms, I just cover most of it with makeup, except for a safety pinned heart.

"As I was saying, I feel a little s-" I began but got interrupted, again. Why does this keep happenimg to me. I look up to see who interrupted me and, boy, he was hot, wait what am I saying?

"Hey, Carrie, I thought you were gonna sit with us." A guy came up to us, he had an Australian accent like us. He had dirty blonde hair styled into a quiff, sea blue eyes, and a couple of tattoos. He was wearing a black Nirvanna shirt with a yellow smiley face, black skinny jeans with perfect cut holes in the knees, and black vans. Guessing on his color of clothing, he likes black clothes, probably a punk.

"Guys, this is my cousin, Luke!" Carrie squealed. She had an American accent, weird. (A/n: I don't know what wut Bryana Holly's accent is, so just roll with it.)

"Hi I'm Luke." Luke smiled widely.

"I'm Layla Fevie, that's Macy Harbor and that's Daniella Jackie Toret, just call her Jackie." Layla yelled while my jaw dropped because she used my full first name.

"Like Jackie Chan?" Carrie and Luke asked in unison. They both started laughing while I held it in.

"Sorta, so what are your full names?" I asked while picking up my fork and digged it into my pizza. Carrie looked at me with a questioning face. I wonder why...

"I'm Luke Hemmings and this is Carrie Heart." Luke said smiling with his dimples.

End Of Flashback

And that's how we met......

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A/n: That was the first chapter to my Jackie redo if you read the old ones I'm remaking them, this used to be 'He's My Bully' but I changed everything up, but doesn't mean Jackie isn't a bad girl. This is sorta like a Punk Luke Hemmings, I don't know, It's your opinion anyway... I'm still gonna redo all the other books so there will be three, also counting the new Jackie book that I'm going to change the cover because... Balls... I don't know, I just want to. I also have like 500,000,000,000,001 books I'm still making that aren't out... ITS AN ODD NUMBER!!!!!!!!!! I already made the next five chapters and I'm just revising and editing, also I have shit internet where I'm at and I'm sick with strep throat so it hurts to talk, swallow, eat, yawn, etc. So I'm going rest all day and I'm gonna have enough free time to make loads of chapters for this book, Heartache On The Big Screen, and Online Games, maybe even My Bestfriend's Brother! So I hope you enjoy my shitty books and all, so I hope you have a great time reading this book, for now bye. I also apologize for a long a/n.

So what is your favorite story on Wattpad?

Mine is 'I Hate You L.H' by soyeahfivesauce it always will be my favorite book, always.

Should I make my chapters longer or shorter?

Do I describe too much or not at all?

Did I make any mistakes? If so, tell me please.

Did you check out any of my other books? If so, did you like them?

Do I ask too many questions?

Yes...

Okay goodbye for now 5sos fam! Until the next chapter, bye! Nooooooo! I just did that because I wanted at least 1000 words but the last goodbye was 999 so I got pissed and did that so now goodbye!

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