(Slow updates)Ghost hunter

Haunted mansion

(Edited)
                         Case 1
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                    Mai Pov
Flashback
It all started three days ago when Eren Ackerman ( I couldn't think of a other name so I used his) cane by the office to ask us if we could help him and his family with the ghost at his mansion he said the the ghost would throw thing, open and close doors, he said he would hear knocking noises and voice and that out all of them the ghost hurt his twin boys the most he started to get scared for his kids like so he came to us so we took the case
End of flashback
Now we are just two hours away from their house I look up and see Lin and Naru talking about the case I start to feel sleepy next thing I know I was in a big house so I start to walk around I hear screaming I look into the room the screaming is coming from I see a man woman and two kids the woman and man are fighting and the kids are cry on the couch I listen to what the guy is saying "YOU BITCH DONT TRY AND PROTECT THOSE MONSTERS MOVE SO I CAN KILL THEM!
NO I WONT LET YOU HURT MY KIDS ANYMORE I HAVE HAD ENOUGH WHAT HAVE THEY DONE NOTHING AND THEY ARE NOT MONSTER YOUR THE MONSTER!
YOU BITCH THATS IT!"
The next thing I knew the man shot the woman then went after the kids "STOP DONT HURT THEM!" I yell but that didn't help he then shot his two kids"NO!" I yell I fell to the floor and cry.
Naru Pov
I hear a voice and then something that sound like crying I then look behind me Mai she was talking and it look like she had tears on her cheek I look at Lin and said "Lin stop the car" he looks at me weird but does what I say once he's stops I get out and got to Mai's side of the car and open her door Mai wake up I say she doesn't answer so I start to shake her Mai I say louder she then slowly opens her eyes once she saw me she hug me and started to cry "Mai what's wrong" I said "I had one of those dreams" she said "Mai can you tell what happened in that dream" I said "Yes but we need to get to the house for the case" she said "yes we do okay Mai move down some I will sit beside you so u tell me what  happened" I said okay she said as she was moving over "Lin you can start to drive now" I said I see him nod his head.
Mai's Pov (again)
As Lin starts to drive Naru starts to ask me questions "okay Mai tell me what happened" "Well I was in a big house and heard yelling so I go to the door I hear it coming from there was a man, woman and two kids that looked like twins" I start to shake when I remember what was going to happen next then Naru put a hand on my shoulder and said "Mai it's okay I'm here nothing will happen" "Okay then i listen to what the man was saying he said you bitch don't try and protect those monster move so I can kill them I take a breath then the woman yelled back no I won't let you hurt my kids anymore I have had enough what have they done nothing and they are not the monsters your the monster
Then he yelled you bitch that it he then killed the woman and went for the kids I yelled no don't hurt them but before I could move he shot his kids two I then fell to the floor and started to cry then I woke up to your face" just as I finish telling Naru we get to the mansion Lin stops the car then gets out we get out to and go to the door we knock on the door and then a man opens the door "you must be the people that eren was talking about" he says In a voice that makes him sound angry "EREN THE PEOPLE ARE HERE" he yells "OKAY I'M COMING" I hear in the distance then eren comes up to the door "please come in this guy here is my husband Levi" he say as he leads us to the living room we sit on the couch "do any of you want tea" eren says "yes please says me, Lin and naru Levi just nods his head okay I will go make it" eren says "wait i can come help I'm always making naru's tea" I say "that will help a lot" he say well smiling once we finish making the tea we go to the living room once I give the tea to Lin and naru as eren give tea to Levi then we sit down as I sit down I see two little kids standing in the door way "oh there you two are" says eren the two little boys come over to me and look at me "miss what's your name" they say with the cutest smiles on there faces "I'm Mai Taniyama and that's Lin and Naru" I says as I point at Lin and naru "Mai-Onesan you are really pretty" they say at the same time "think you but can you guys tell me your name" I say with a smile on my face "yes I'm Nobuo Ackerman and this is  Nobuyuki Ackerman" he says as he points at himself then at his brother ( Nobuo means faithful man and Nobuyuki means faithful happiness there is picture of the twins at bottom of page)then I hear a voice say "is there a place that we can set our stuff up"
"Yes" I hear a other voice as I'm looking at the little boys smiling "Mai come we are setting up base" said Naru okay coming I say.
               1 hour later
We just finished setting up base and putting our stuff in our rooms I got one of the rooms close to Nobuo and Nobuyuki room the oversize was there parents room i was the last one to finish putting my stuff a way so as I'm heading down the hallway I hear a voice "you look like my wife I can't wait to kill you like i killed her" I start running to the base once I get in Naru asked what happened " I was on my way here when I heard you look like my wife I can't wit to kill you like i can't wait to kill you" as I finish that we hear screaming we run out of the base to see the two shaking "what happened you can tell Onesan" "We saw a scary man laughing at us Mai-Onesan we're scared" they said I bend down and hug them "it's okay you have your dads and Onesan and her friends to keep you safe" as I'm saying this eren and Levi come running down the stairs "what happened to them" I tell them what happened and they hug them "dad(dad is Levi and daddy is eren) and daddy can Mai-Onesan sleep in our room please" they said with puppy dog eyes "if Mai's fine with it I don't see why not" said eren and Levi just nods his head "ya I'm fine with sleeping with them" I say. After dinner now bed for the kids

"Naru, Lin I'm going to take them and go to sleep now" I say they nod their heads Naru wasn't really happy that I had to go to bed earlier then we usually I get the boys go to their room get in bed and I fall asleep with them sleeping on my chest next thing I know I was standing in front of a woman and she say "be careful he will come for you and the kids" as she says that I'm keep looking at her face wait she looks like my moms sister aunt Tsukiko ( Tsukiko means moon child if you wanted to know and the picture for this chapter is Mai's Anut)
Her eyes widen yes it seems you remember me my little Mai I went to run and hug her but before I could.
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these are the twins Nobu and Nobuyuki eren and Levi sons are adopted.