The Valued Customer (A One Direction Fanfic)

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A/N Okay so this is my first fanfiction and i have a few ideas but nothing for certain yet. Any ideas will be appreciated.

I PROMISE IT GETS BETTER THE MORE YOU READ, THE LADS DONT REALLY COME I UNTIL ABOUT PART 4? BUT READ THIS PART TO UNDERSTAND WHERE THEY CAME FROM 

lets give this a shot?

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The name's Olivia but most people call me Liv. Except my mum; she tends to call me livel because I used to call myself nevil but hey! livel is slightly less embarrassing i suppose...

I'm 18 and I'm from Cornwall in the south west coast of Britain. I love it there! the beaches, shops, food, hot surfer boys and not to mention the ice cream <3 (A/N if you havent tried cornish ice cream i suggest you do!) I just completed my A levels and achieved A*s, A's and B's in all of my subjects and, in two weeks, I'm off to University *whoop whoop*. I've been accepted to Doncaster Uni and I am over the moon!

*Flasback 2 weeks*

I sprinted the short distance from my school to my home in a secluded lane across the road. My house is quite big and white; an old cottage but my mum and stepdad have made it modern inside. They love an interior design challenge and are always changing things in the house! Luckily I'm quite sporty because when i think about it that was a long way to sprint. Constantly glancing at the paper brown envelope i had tightly grasped in my hand. I knew my results but couldn't wait to show my parents. I burst through the door nearly ripping it off of its hinges! "MUM?!" I yelled through the house. "My office!" she replied signalling her location in the house. I ran up to the top floor of our 3 storey house. 'Wow I really need to get fitter' i though to myself as i once again ran and squealed due to my pure excitement. Stopping to compose myself before entering my Mother's pristine black and white office where she was sat on her mac. 'work' i though to myself as i rolled my eyes in annoyance. Dont get me wrong, my parents work HARD to provide for our family. Okay we are quite wealthy but thats due to hard work not by chance. Mum's stare rose from the lit screen and met my excited gaze where i held my results in the air. The penny dropped and she leapt out of her plush office chair and tottered towards me in her heels that, may i add, no middle aged woman should be seen wearing. She snatched my results and tore them out of the envelope. I watched on in anticipation as her eyes rapidly scanned the page. "waahhhhhhh" she shreiked, "Liv!!! This is amazing! wahh well done!" I smiled at her, the biggest grin plastered across her face. "thanks mum I'm so happy!" I managed o get in over the sound of her heals jumping up and down and spinning wildly. I grabbed her shoulders and stood her still. looking into her eyes we both burst into laughter and she cupped my face squishing my cheeks as though i had botox covering my emerald green eyes. As she began to tear up in realisation we hugged each other, holding the meaningful embrace for about 15 seconds. Stepping away and gently mopping her tears, careful not to smudge the pretty looking masacra she spoke up "quick! you must ring Graham and let him know!" Graham was my stepdad of 10 years. He was an accountant that dealt with celebrities and advised them on where to put their bags of money! He'll never be my dad but he's the only father figure of importance in my life and i appreciate all he does to support our family. She passed me her sleek white iphone 5 and i pressed his speed dial. *ring rig ring ri..* "Cath?" He asked in his professional business voice. "I'm Just with a client is everything okay darling?" work again.. "Hi Graham its me, Liv" I explained timidly worried that he would be annoyed I called during a business meeting. "liv sweety! how did the results go?!" he asked eagerly. I heard him mutter something to his client "sorry my daughter's just received her results to her exams could you excuse me Mr Tomlinson" I heard shuffling as he got up "I've got 3a*s in English, PE and Biology. An A in Maths and a B in pshycology. But i dont mind because it won't affect my career or anything" I claimed "WAH LIV! Thats amazing! Wow I'm so proud" he softened his voice realising his surroundings. "what uni are you attending then?!" he questioned. "I got into my first preference; DONCASTER!" i screamed. Mum giggled beside me whilst Graham simply congratulated me. "I've got to get back to my client, Mr Tomlinson is a valued cuustomer sweety but wah well dne!" he expressed yet again. "hehe thank you. I will see you when you get home. Love you" i stated "love you back" he said before we hung up. I was '#buzzin'

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A/N okay i know its short but everything has to start somewhere. I haven't quite decided who Liv could be yet however, i feel her mum (Cath) should be like the british version of Kris Jenner (picture somewhere?) Liv has emerald green eyes, mid brunette hair and a side fringe. I'm not sure?

Update later today maybe? going to ride my horses now so i dont know. defo one tomorrow though. Read, Vote etc.

ILY <3

once again

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August 28th 2013

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