Disclaimer: I don't own the story or the characters. They belong to the author Charlaine Harris. I am not making any profit from this. I am just borrowing them for fun. If you have any questions or comments feel free to do so. I would like to know how the story is doing.
March 8, 2017
First I want to announce that I am back and ready to continue this story. Life got too busy and I had to stop writing it, but it is now settled, and I'm ready to continue this rewrite! I hope you will give me the opportunity to entertain you with this story. Enjoy the ride!!!
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As we know, CH HEA didn't fulfill our dreams. It didn't fulfill mine for sure. Therefore, in order to find closure and to please many friends who are struggling with the same problem, I am going to re-do the ending. There are several things that I think need to be addressed in order for the ending to feel natural.
1. One of them is to rewrite several parts of Deadlocked where CH opens the doors for her horrible ending (right about halfway the book). Not everything will be rewritten, just the main points to make Sookie behave more into character and to keep our Viking in his Alpha role (a position he deserves). Once things are settled, the story will depart away from the original storyline and new plots will be added (forget the last book in the series... as if it never existed!). No matter what happens, this story is for Sookie and Eric. The way the story should have ended, but didn't.
2. I am going to do my best to tell the story in Sookie's POV. I really hope that I can give her justice. My goal is to make it fun while we reach our happy ending.
3. I will add some chapters with Eric's POV... just for fun. I think that we should get a glimpse of what goes on inside his mind... and heart!
4. I don't know how many chapters will take to reach the HEA ending. However, I promise to make the journey fun and entertaining. After all, this is what it's all about... to have fun!
5. Feel free to write reviews and to comment on the chapters. I want to know if you are enjoying the story since this is the first time I write Fanfiction. Thank you in advanced for your eternal support.
Deadlocked re-write
Chapter 1- 5
Summary: Sookie went to Hooligans for Ladies Only Night. She saw a lot fairies working there. In the morning Niall comes to visit her. After a talk between Niall, Dermot, Sookie and Claude about who put the spell on Dermot, Niall takes Claude to Faery to solve the mystery. Dermot is making renovations to the attic turning it into a bedroom. Mustapha Khan, Eric's daytime guy, visits Sookie with a message from Eric, another one from Pam, and another one from him. I am posting the scene because it is an important message for Sookie and for the story:
"Felipe de Castro is coming to Shreveport to talk about the disappearance of his buddy Victor."
"Oh, shit," I said.
"Say it, Sookie. We're in for it now." He smiled.
"That's it? That's the message?"
"Eric would like you to come to Shreveport tomorrow night to greet Felipe."
"I won't see Eric till then?" I could feel my face narrow in a suspicious squint. That didn't suit me at all. The thin cracks in our relationship would only spread wider if we didn't get to spend time together.
"He has to get ready," Mustapha said, shrugging. "I don't know if he got to clean out his bathroom cabinets or change the sheets or what. 'Has to get ready' is what he told me."
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Dead Ever After Re-write (Sookie Stackhouse and Eric Northman)
FanfictionCH HEA didn't fulfill our dreams. Therefore, in order to find closure I am going to rewrite several parts of Deadlocked to fix the story. Then, new plots will follow to make Sookie behave more into character and for our Viking to keep his Alpha role...