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Alright here's my first review:
I really loved your story, but I think there's always room for improvement. I only read "Wild Nights" but I noticed that your covers are a bit displeasing to the eye. Find a style of covers you like and make one using my favorite app to make covers, phonto.
The plot was amazing and EXTREMELY UNIQUE. You have such a creative mind!!! Just make sure some things add up; Lululemon in the 80's? Maybe not lol. But again, you have insane originality (which is extremely uncommon). I think you are doing/could do amazing things. I honestly think you could be great/get major attention with your writing.
Please continue this book! I loved it and I marveled at how you really captured Rio. The way you depicted him and the things he said, like when we showed up to run hungover and didn't want her to change the running practice, was something River would really do. It shows how much you really know River which will really put your work above a lot of other writers.
Lastly, proof read is all I ask as it really makes all the difference.
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