Unbroken: Luke Brooks (DISCONTINUED)

Chapter 17

Hey guys!! So this is chapter 18 and im thinking of ending it at 25 maybe. I just need to do a few more things then its over. I really enjoyed writing this book. It's basically my biggest book and i got some good feedback. About feedback, PLEASE COMMENT if i should continue this further than 25 like it u actually like it. Please do that for me!! So i watched this is us on Thursday for the advanced screening and then i went back on Friday and watched it again. I CRIED BOTH TIMES WHAT. Omfg best song ever just came on. Lol how perfect. The freaking feels omg bye bye Bye. Aha. I love you guys and I REACHED 1000 READS OMFGGGThanks so much for that by the way!! Im so excited for my next book ((the harry one)) because i already got the part of how they meet down. Usually i just go with it but ya. Lets just get started with chapter 18 before i ramble and spoil everything. Heheh have a good day hopefullly you guys read these because i read yours. Have a good day thoooough(:

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Chapter 17

Nothing happened at the club except for me getting over luke. Mel says her brothers friend is really hot and if he wasn't her brother best friend, she would have already went after him. She talked to him and tonight me the girls him and his friend Max including Mel's brother are going out to a different club.

The girls were over at my house getting me ready. And themselves too. Summer picked out a dress simliar to yesterday's for me. It was black without lace and the back was open except this one was a bit shorter if that were possible.

Summer and Mel wore identical ones to mine but Summer's being a navy blue and Mel's being maroon. We all wore black heels and had our phones in one hand and black clutches in the other.

My hair was slightly curled and my makeup was very similar to yesterdays. Everything was almost like yesterdays just a touch different.

9 O'Clock

Mel's brothers friend, which i had found out his name was Liam. I did fangirl just a tad because of One Direction but thats besides the point. He is very attractive i must say. He is tall and fit. It was just so damn tempting to rip off his shirt to show his 6 pack. I resisted the urge to do anything so he wouldn't think i am some kind of freak.

Aside from my sexual thoughts about him, he was very attractive and drop down gorgeous. Tonight would be loads of fun. I got thrown out of my thoughts when Mel gestured me to get into the car. I flopped down beside Summer in the back seat followed by Mel. In the front seat of Liams truck was Liam in the drivers than Max sqwished between Liam and Mel's brother Ryan.We drove away from my house and drove to this club.

I figured it would be further than the usual club because we have been in the car for more than twenty minutes. We slowly pulled into a parking space at this mysterious club. I got out of the truck with a jump and looked around and saw that we were at "Bic's Place" which was a new one to me because i've never seen this place before. Summer soon jumped out of the car and joined me and Mel on the ground.

I glanced over at Liam who was looking at me. Damn he is one fine piece of man. I just wanted to run up tohim and kiss him. Only one guy has ever made me feel like this. Im trying to avoid saying his name. I don't know what tonight will bring me but god i hope i get to kiss Liam. Wow i sound like im in seventh grade again. But he is really cute and sweet so who knows. He probably thinks im some weirdo like everyone else does.

Shit shit shit shit shit. He probably caught me looking and now he is coming over. Shit he probably heard all that. God shoot me please. Well my predictions were wrong. He came over to me and put his arm around my waist and walked with me. Did i mention he was sweet and attractive? Well he is.

We got into the crowed place and Liam brought me closer to him. I was now in front of him and he was behind me guiding me through the crowd. I smiled to myself. Not knowing why. Ugh why am i so weird. We walked over to the bar and he bought me a maragrita and got himself a beer. We just talked about different things.

"wanna dance" he asked. I smiled and nodded. Putting his bottle down, he grabbed my hand and lead me to the dance floor i guess. I don't even know what song was playing because i was just looking into his beautiful ocean blue eyes that complimented his gorgeous dirty blonde hair. He was literally one of those guys pulled out of tumblr.

"you look very lovely tonight Maddie" i blushed and looked down. "thank you" i said. I looked him up and down. "you don't look too bad yourself Liam" i added. He smiled. Even his smile made my knees weak. We just laughed and talked while we danced. I felt like i really knew him. Sorta. Before i knew it, his lips crashed to mine. Damn he even knew how to kiss. I obviously kissed him back. It ended. And when i went to open my eyes, he wasn't there but he was on the floor. I looked around and saw the one and only Luke Brooks with a furios look on his face. I looked back down at Liam with a bloddy nose and busted lip. I knelt down beside him and caressed his face. "are you okay?" i asked. He gave me a little nodd. With that, i stood up to face luke. "what the actual fuck luke?" i screamed. He didn't reply. "god luke. You can have a girlfriend but i can't kiss someone? Like fuck off luke. I don't wanna see you right now. Just leave me alone" i yelled and pushed him away and went back to Liam. I helped him up and took him to the back where it was less crowded.

"Hey you okay?" i asked concerned. "yeah. Thanks Maddie. But who is he?" he referred to luke. "well he is my ex boyfriend. He doesn't understand that i don't care about him right now because the other day he texted me saying we needed to talk and he said that he had a girlfriend. Like i don't really care. I might have cried yes because i thought he loved me but he really didn't. He told me he would wait for me but he just forgot about everythi-" liam cut me off by kissing me. God i wanted to kiss him forever.his lips were so soft and amazing to kiss. I kissed him back without hesitation. He pulled away and smiled and pressed his forehead to mine. I smiled back kind of blushing. The littlest of things make me blush.

just wanted him to be mine even though we only met like four hours ago. But again, this whole thing was for us to meet and me getting over luke more. " i know we only met and i know this is probably so rushed but i feel like i can tell you anything and i just like you. Alot actually" he said. I blushed and looked down. Im not sure if he was asking me to be his girlfriend bu- he pulled me out of my thoughts by saying "will you be my girlfriend" obviously im gunna say yes. I leaned in and kissed him. Hopefully anwsering his question. I pulled away and nodded. We both smiled and kissed again.

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So there is only gunna be a few more chapters: (i really enjoyed writing this book. And Liam is played by the one and only Dylan O'Brien. YOUR WELCOME. Have a good day and sorry for not updating eariler in the day. IM GOING BACK TO SCHOOL IN LIKE LESS THAN 35 HOURS OR SOMETHING AHH HELP ME I JUST NOPE I DONT WANNA GO BACK NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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