I continue to the next page.
She asked me what I was writing about,
I said someone.
She said who.
I said just someone.
she said ok.
And when she was walking back
I whispered,
you.
She asked me why I couldn't tell her
who I was writing about.
I said if I did I wouldn't be in control anymore.
she said ok.
If you admit you're in love;
You're not in control anymore.
Your feelings are.
That's why I couldn't tell her.
not entirely happy with the ending either.
Ill get better though, it's only my first story.
dedication: is_thiswonderland, thank you for all your awesome comments they make my week, i love them so much! Also thank you for the song, it goes so well with this chapter its perfect!
much love,
olivia.