This is a song I wrote and recorded with my friend Caitie recently because I went through a break up which was the result of a guy not being able to be in an abstinant relationship. It ticked me off, and this is the result. Feedback? :) LISTEN TO THE SONG HERE: http://soundcloud.com/allisonneely/satisfaction-feat-caitie-green
*** It was edited in Audacity, so it's not PERFECT, but it's pretty pro! :D honest feedback please***
Verse 1 (Allison)
Really? That's how you play it?
Know what you're thinkin' but you just won't say it.
And as long as ya keep it up, I ain't never givin' up
Save yourself some regret and say you wish we'd never met
Not gonna lie
You got me down on my luck again,
Thinkin' I can never win,
Ain't worth it now,
It seems it wasn't even worth it then
Why'd I even mess with him?
He just wanna get it in
Threw me in the trash-bin
Left so he could sin again
What kinda man is that? Not one, in fact. He's in the wrong.
Chorus (Caitie & Allison)
He just wants to get it in
I'm not gonna give him that Satisfaction
He just wants to play me up
I'm not gonna give him that Satisfaction
You don't wanna treat me right
Then boy just get right out of my life
I don't wanna be the fool who falls in love with you
Verse 2 (Allison)
Hold up
Back to beginning
Let's play this game right, gotta get through the first inning
Talk about winning, but all I ever do is lose
I tell this to you
You're like "girl, ya gotta choose...
...is it me or nothin'?"
You don't look like you're bluffin'
I look into your eyes and suddenly we're startin' somethin'
It's comin'
I can feel it comin'
S-A-T-I-S-F-A-C-T-I-O-N
S-A-T-I-S-F-A-C-T-I-O-N
And ya ain't gettin' none of it
Til ya win my heart
Listen to this rap song blowin' the charts
Gotta hand it to ya boy, you're a work of art
You say "no I ain't"
I say "yes you are"
Just look at yourself drvin' fancy cars
Gettin' looks all the way from here to Mars
Could you be the one that's gonna heal my scars?
You got the hottest facebook avatars
But I don't care
About the things you got
You're gonna lose 'em someday
Like it or not
Caitie Green over there, drop it like it's hot
She's about to rap it out
Show 'em what you got
Verse 3 (Caitie)
Word
Look at you boy
You're a piece of work
Think u gonna play her, right? But she's gonna keep it tight!
She's my homie, fool, so take a step back
She deserves better, she sees all that you lack
You're a jealous cunt, you ain't got no game
Nigga, you can't front! You're just causin' her pain
I love this girl
Yeah u heard me right!
She ain't the next best thing! And Shes takin flight!
Shes above you now
Way outta your reach
On the edge of the wave and she's bout to breach!
She don't need you 'cause she rolls like that
Now she's on her feet
Yeah nigga she's back!
Miss Independent, 'bout to hit that!
She's a big girl, she can handle herself
You wish you had her back; so does everybody else!
Listen to her now, she don't talk for her health!
She's singin for you, boy! Al, how is it spelled?
Bridge (Allison)
S-A-T-I-S-F-A-C-T-I-O-N
S-A-T-I-S-F-A-C-T-I-O-N
(Let's Go!)
Last Chorus (Allison)
He just wants to get it in
I'm not gonna give him that Satisfaction
He just wants to play me up
I'm not gonna give him that Satisfaction
You don't wanna treat me right
Then boy just get right out of my life
I don't wanna be the fool who falls in love with you
