O.K so I really like doing this. The first couple chapters probably weren't as good but they will be getting better. I'm new to this so be patient with me!
-Kisses ♥
Breelyn P.O.V.
I've only been in Atlanta for a couple of hours but, I'm loving it. Miami is definitely prettier but there is just something about Atlanta that I just can't put my finger on.
Me: I'm so happy I'm here and we can got to meet each other! Chance is going to be so happy your preggo.
Jaleesa: I am too lil sis! Whatever you want to do we can do. Whatever you want you can have. I'm going to be doing a lot of making up for the past fourteen years. The last time I saw you, you were two so I know you don't remember me. What do you want to do today?
Me: I'm going to love it here! I want to go shopping but, I do I have a niece or nephew and do I have a brother-in-law?
Jaleesa: You have a niece and you have a soon to be brother-in-law.
Me: Ahhhh I'm so excited I get to spoil her rotten. She is going to spend summers with TeeTee Bree! We are going to be so close! Now when do I get to meet my brother-in-law?
Jaleesa: oh lord you are going to send her back to me with attitude and all. He is going to meet us at the mall.
Me: Yes I am she is going to be TeeTee's lil diva. What are you going to name her???
Jaleesa: we are going to name her Courtney Kalise but the middle name is still debatable
Me: I like the name Kalise is pretty but she needs a name that is made for her. Like China Maree or Madisyn Marie! Maybe even China Kalise
Jaleesa: I love the name China actually I love China Maree it's pretty and different but o so cute!! I'm going to have to talk to Rah about it.
This is so exciting I'm going to be an Aunt! Again if Chantelle wasn't such a hoe I would be happy for her. My brother has a lot going on with his career and I won't let her ruin it. I gave Jaleesa the run down on my brother and Chantelle. She wasn't shocked that she turned up pregnant.
Jaleesa P.O.V.
I picked up my sister Breelyn from the airport now we are on our way to the mall. It has been a really long time since I have seen her. I want to fucking beat Chances ass but I will wait on that. He knows better I know ma taught him better. I haven't seen chance since he was one. Chance was with Dad's sister when I went to visit once so I couldn't see him.
Breelyn P.O.V.
We arrive at the mall and Jaleesa calls Rahkim to tell him were we are. I told her I want to go to the baby store. I want a bunch of stuff monogramed but she still has to fully decide on the name.
I told her I was gonna hit up the Louis Store for a new purse and told her to just sit down because we had only been in the mall for about 30 minutes and her feet were swollen. As I walked into the store I bumped into a brick wall. That's what I get for looking at my phone while walking. My mother always told me to stop that.
??: My bad ma, you good
Me: yeah, I'm good
??: What's your name beautiful:
Me: Breelyn and thank you what's yours?
I blushed
??: I'm Darnell, you cute when you blush n shit
Damn Darnell was fine as hell he was just like POW! POW! POW! DAMN! BAM! Type of sexiness. He was about 6'3 darkskin♥, very muscular, and he had the prettiest eyes. He had on camo shorts, red bulls jersey, and had on a pair of Jordan 11's with red socks. Typical but he was looking hella fine in it.
Me: Thanks, I gotta go I'm supposed to be buying a purse.
Darnell: aight ma, can come wit?
Me: Are you sure? I'll probably be in here for a hot second then I have to go check out some baby stores.
Darnell looked at me like he had just seen a ghost
Me: I'm not pregnant *laughs* I am here with my sister and she is pregnant with my niece.
Darnell: Oh ok I want to come wit I want to meet my future sister-in-law
Me: come on *laughs*
He was cocky just like Chris but, I liked Darnell's cocky.
Darnell P.O.V.
I walked out of the Louis Store looking for something for my mom's birthday and this shorty and me bumped into each other. I found out her name was Breelyn. She was sexy as hell she had caramel skin, a nice shape, and she sure as hell could dress. She had on this long peach romper and it went so good with her skin tone.
Me: So where you are you from ma?
Breelyn: I'm from Miami. I came to Atlanta to meet my sister.
Me: real? How many siblings you got?
Breelyn: I have an older brother named Chance he is going to play for the Lakers and a best friend who is just like my sister Angelique. What about you?
Me: I have two little sisters they're twins and they're 2 and I have a lil bro who is 15. How old are you?
Breelyn: Awww! I love little kids! I am 16 how old are you?
Me: I'm 19
We talked and talked until we went to a footlocker she said she had to pick up a pair of shoes.
Breelyn P.O.V.
I had ordered some customized Jordans before I left and they told me they would be waiting on my when I got to Atlanta.
Breelyn: Hey, I'm here to pick up a pair of Jordans for Breelyn Williams
??: Hey let me go check on that for you?
Me: are you ever going to get tired?
I turned around and looked at Darnell I knew he was looking at my ass the whole time.
Darnell: tired of what? Walking around a mall for hours? Naw! My moms does the same thing.
??. Ma'am here they are, your total is $782.09.
Breekyn: Can I see them and here you go
I handed the lady my card and opened the box and was amazed and shocked at what I was looking at. They were so beautiful. Jordan 11's BUT the black part was hot pink the white part stayed white and the red part was black. The shiny pink part was covered in diamonds.
Darnell: Damn girl where you get that type of money from
Me: my daddy
??: Here you go ma'am there's your card and your receipt is in the bag.
Me: Thank you so much
Darnell: Let me see ya phone
ME: Excuse you
Darnell: give me yo damn phone
I was trying to be cute and not giving a fuck about why he wanted my phone. He eventually wrestled it out of my hands and took it. I was guessing he put his number in there. We eventually walked upon my sis and I'm guessing that was my brother-in-law next to her.
Me: Hey Leese, and Hi I'm Breelyn
I extended my hand out and he shook it
Rahkim: Hey I'm Rahkim but you can just call me Rah.
Me: Jaleesa this is Darnell and Darnell this is Jaleesa my sister
Jaleesa: nice to meet you Darnell
Darnell: nice to meet you too
Darnell was just too much sexy to go into one person.
Darnell: I'll call you later ma aight
He gave me a hug and kissed my forehead and winked
Me: okkaayyyy
Darnell: you better stop with all that blushing
Darnell: P.O.V.
That nigga Rahkim look familiar. I finally went home took a shower and texted Bree.
Me: You want to come over and chill with me?
MyBree♥: I have no way of getting to your house. I'm sure as hell my sis aint gone drop me off with a nigga she and I just met. Who told you to put MyKing♥ in my phone?
Me: I'll come get you ma. I did boo
MyBree♥: whatever I'll text you the address.
Me: aight ma ;)
Breelyn P.O.V.
So we just get to my sis house and settled in. Her house was gorgeous. My room was like my room at home amazing. I look at my phone and I had a text from Darnell, Chance, Mom, Dad, and Angelic. I opened Darnell's.
MyKing♥: You want to come over and chill with me?
So surprisingly Jaleesa said I could but Rahkim wasn't too fond of the idea. I went to the bathroom and did my hygiene and took a shower. I put on some dark colored jegging, a white tank top, a chunky gold chain necklace, and my Jordan grapes. I put my hair in a cute ballerina bun and put some eyeliner on. I grabbed my purse and phone. I texted him the address. I heard him honk and I ran downstairs and kissed my sister belly and said by babies. I got in his truck. It was a white diamond Ram. I loved those. He had on some red and black adidas jogging pant, slides, and a wife beater.'
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Teen Fiction( Book 1) Breelyn is a 16 year old girl who recently found out she has a sister, while visiting her sister she meets a guy named Darnell who is dealer. Will their relationship last or will somebody else come and sweep her off her feet? -Kisses